Books with such a plot is rare compared to the traditional xuanxuan books.Unlike most of books ,the author has written the book in such a way that the mc is that not much physically capable but has good mental prowess .such a plot is very rare and also characters are depicted just the right way ,(not too much not to little )
A kingdom-building novel that's good. This site is seriously lacking on pure kingdom-building novel I've been reading since the beginning of Webnovel and I've only discovered 3 pure kingdom-building novels.1. The World Online2. Release that Witch3. Sword of DawnThat's the only pure kingdom-building novel I've read in this site hope it will get chosen to make it 4
God awful writing quality.The story itself is pretty much written by a child.The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much.There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.
it is just such a good story I just read all of it in one sitting, and im just shocked I loved this story so much it is absolutely amazing and it is definitely a must read
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In terms of character design, I can't really say much. The story is currently too short to have a very good picture of the characters. One thing I can say though is that the characters aren't dumb harem protagonists, they actually behave like normal people. Stability of updates good, but the author has too many stories, so they're slow. World background is awesome, reason for reincarnation finally has some form of logic.
Disclaimer: Types of stories like these are not my cup of tea, so I won’t lie, I did not go far in this story. But from what I read, I will give an honest review. It is a good story for readers who lije stiff like this. Your writing is good and interesting, although you have grammar mistakes that need to be fixed(dialogue and the big spaces you have between the commas). Break up your paragraphs a little, too. Other than that I seen no other problems, your character building is good and the ones who like stories like this, will enjoy it. Keep up the good work!