This book is freaking awesome. It was recommended by a friend and I must admit, it's on a whole new level. Every aspect of the story you can think of is a true masterpiece. Deserves more than five stars. Truly a must-read. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
It has a good potential! But author needs to arrange it well and there are some words that needs spacing.
In Master Egor's Guild
this novel is a break for me from all the same type of novel going on with mc being indifferent ,cold and lustful.
Another ein story to enjoy like the rest of his stories. :)
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Reminds me of Tree of Aeons...............................................................................................................
Very good stuff author nim keep it up
Read 7 chapters. For someone who dies because of wishing to see his sister, she hadn't been mentioned once in his thoughts. Quote: "He usually would not go this route because it led through an enemy gang's turf but his desire to see his sister clouded his judgement. ""He knew it was wrong but it was the only way he could keep his family fed and it offered a semblance of protection in their violence filled neighborhood."It would seem that the MC turned into "What past? I have no past." This basically made the beginning pointless. The novel might as well have started with the demons right away. Because the cornerstones of what made MC at the beginning, him valuing family and bearing responsibility, are jettisoned right after, turning him into an empty state character who, as he quips after the fact he is leveling his following skill.Quote: "Azemo kept leveling his only skill as he silently followed Zaebos, he would probably be a max level follower in no time."Also, quote: "We summoned you eight to become generals in the war against humanity. "After hearing the demon say, that MC will have to kill his mom and sister since they are humans, his next shown thought is... Quote: "'This room is really cozy.' "Yeah, zero reaction. MC is an empty puppet. Which makes demons in return hollow shells. Demons against Humans are morality war between good and evil. There can't be good or evil if the MC is an empty shell of a character who simply reacts after hearing all this. "'This room is really cozy.' ".......Well, at least the grammar here is fine and well written in places. The sentences flow smoothly. Which actually just dragged me down more. Empty shell MC is usually found in authors with poor grammar and jumpy sentences that are smooth as sandpaper.In the end I feel disappointed.
uh, this is a story that makes the brain work. a story about the dark underworld, the writing is really cool, the plot is also very curious. good job author! I'm waiting for the next part!
Not able to understand the story flow and and the time skips make this a horrible read.Ex :- Chapter 3-5 the whole time line is messed up.Bye