a very nice writing and you describe the characters really well. Reading the prologue is not enough so I had to read the next chapter and not gonna lie, it shocked me and kinda didn't see that coming. Well done
This is a really nice story, I'm not a fan of first person POV but the author did a great job in writing. The synopsis is really nice and the story is something worth reading
So far, so good, love ma a Anti Hero mc
I like the concept of the story. And it has potential. But when the 'damsel in distress' scenario happens in chapter 4 itself, it's so disappointing. And the way the MC speaks to other women just irks me.
What I'm saying is, HAREM is fine. But it should be done tastefully otherwise just don't do it. When you bring a woman this soon into the story, it just ruins the future plot.
Another novel with potential got ruined.
It's nice, I enjoyed it. It's like reading about a typical shounen protagonist that wins out of sheer luck.
Very well written story and characters. only detractor from full score for me is the authors sometimes long-winded explanations of powers and when worldbuilding.
Honestly liking a lot so far. Hope the author continues with it. ?❤️
Would make an awesome manga or anime. The supernatural element makes it appealing to a wider audience!
A really good original novel that you won’t regret giving a read.
Writing Quality - Not much to say about this because there are rarely any obvious mistakes I can pickup on.
Stability of Updates - There are regular updates (Though, there are never enough chapters when you really enjoy a story).
Story Development - I like the current development of the story and you can tell the author is either well read or has done some research into the current specifics of the story. I would like to have a closer look at the actual system and the main uses of it for the MC, because at the moment the most important aspects I can think of are the map and crafting. It feels like he has been neglecting his responsibilities as a Lord in his own territories and I would like to see his making better use and giving a better look into the running of his current lands. With all the statistics available from the system I would think that he could create some medium long and easy to understand plans?
Character Design - The character designs for the people that matter are well thought out. Even some side characters and the general attitudes of the nobles proves enlightening. The only thing that irritates me at times is the Main Character and his many tangents. Though, I suspect that is a design of the author on purpose. It just seems like the MC likes to jump from one thing to the next like an excited child and not being able to wait to show his efforts to all the people (Yet having nothing physical to show for that idea yet)
World Background - The general lay of the world is proving to be well written. I’m not particularly well informed on polish geography and what has been established is well done, It would prove useful for the author to at some point once the MC has a stable land ownership to creat a map with the different colour coding to show who owns what (I find it helps with visualisation).
Overal, a fantastic piece of work.
Luke's character is very much the centre piece and one which I have grown fond of. The updates on the chapters are very fast and this makes my day more relaxing as I read through the chapters. Hoping this work continues and we get to a point where we wait eagerly for the next novel/chapter.
Everybody, set up novel requests for this novel on the forum. They removed this just so to pick a novel from 2 weeks ago. If we can bring Plague Doctor back into the webnovel field, I don't believe that we can't bring this novel back from the dead.
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