GreatestGrandpa
wow! !wonderful...what a book the book is really awesome...clap for you...keep up the good work author... I would be right here with you
Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.
honest to God this will degrade your brain cells until there is no brain anymore if you're going to ask why just read to chapter 7 and you would get it I definitely can't keep reading for the ones who giving fake reviews shame on you???? anyway don't take my word for it just read a few chapters and you'll see
I read the synopsis and it looks like an interesting story. Other than that, I read some reviews and got annoyed by a 1 star review filled with gibberish so I decided to leave a 5 star in retaliation.
Great writing and interestIng MC. This book has a lot of promise )
The grammer is horrible. There is poor character development and the guy is so overpowered that he jumps to level 10 within ten minutes of starting the game
The grammar is little bit off but what the heck!! Its one hell of a story. I loved it. Please keep translating...... I like the way both the mc and his best friend James got their man. It would be cherry on top of the ml could be more rough I mean to the enemies he he he. Please translate faster in the future please...... it would be nice if there would villian or third party interested in mc Liam. You know he is so cute and adorable. A man of status like the ml who can put some taste and charm in the love story.
It nice and comfortable so far so good I hope you keep writing this it bring a new perspective of sorts.!!°°°°☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆♧◇♤☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
A story with a disguised karma system given to a fool of a MC. So one would expect a light comedy from this story.It is probably worth checking it out, but, for me, the MC doesn't manage to give me even the smallest of smiles much less earn my reading time.I have read too little a quantity of chapters to get a good feel of it. Who knows how it will develop?
This is actually a really great story, a bit slow in the beginning but persevere past the first few chapters and it gets better. The MC wasn't what I thought he would be though it's not the most OP protagonist but he is pretty powerful. I like the idea and plot of the story, hope you continue to update regularly.
I have tk say the the chapter were so drawing to read that I could stop reading I got through half the book in a day. It was insane u haven't ? that happy to read and fall asleep in a book Ina while.
Has been great so far.?? ................................................................................................................................................
