It was a really smooth read and the characters mirror classic troupes definitely a decent read. Dive in and I’m sure your going to be intrigued
a really annoying to find niche that is filled out perfectly
If there was room to add a sixth star I would have, I think I just fell in love, this story is very beautiful, I like the way it is portrayed and I'm only in chapter three, I've got to read more
honestly couldn't tell if I even liked the story as they were only three short chapters available to read and chapters 4 through 25 are paywalled by Amazon. which is stupid as most cultivation novel readers don't even know whether they like a cultivation novel until somewhere between chapter 15 and 30 and that's dependent on other factors such as the length of chapters and how much content was in those chapters. so those are key chapters to hooking in new readers to support you on your patreon or whether they want to read more and by the book off Amazon. your marketing strategy is stupid as you don't show enough content to actually hook in new readers to want to buy it.
“Okay. Stay safe.” After seeing the husband off, the wife raised her head to look at the leaves and said, “I think my husband is going to cheat on me soon. Should I… just restart this world?”believe me he won't hahaha
My first time reading such a writing style.The concept is really good, but I feel like the execution hasn't gone properly,There are far too many explanations rather than character interaction, it feels like just reading a paragraph than an interactive novel.Other than that, the s*x scenes are very well written(yeah...I enjoyed them), it seems like the author has very good experience in it! Just kidding.Looking forward to the next chapters and will definitely come back to read it.
It’s not your typical cultivation novel were the mc because a cold blooded killer by chapter 2. And the mc actually has development. I would recommend it to anyone looking for something new.
Its too painful to read i feel like my brain is going to explode. Pls get a decent translator or editor to make it more readable.The stort is not perfect but its not bad either. Its just too hard to make sense of whats happening.
I'm really enjoying the story so far, there's not enough kpop webnovel/fanfictions and out of the few ones that I've red, this is one of the best. Please don't drop this, I'd be so sad if you did.
2 stars for writing quality.the first difficult to understand because of the chaotic displacement of views in the novel. such as from the third view to the views of the main character and vice versa, and or from the view of the main character to the views of other characters and vice versa, and or the third view to the views of other characters and vice versa.second. too few signs to distinguish conversations, thoughts or narratives.2 stars for stability updates.first update unstable could be 1ch / day, 2ch / day, 3ch / day, 1ch / 2 days, and 3ch / 2 days.second. no notice about chapter update1 star for story development.first just follow the same story round get power, revenge / get conflict, finish it (beat / kill / embarrass), get new strength again, and re-repeat. without any plot twist.second. lack of explanation of what, who, where, why, and how at the core of each chapter.third. it seems that the author is very lazy to develop the storyline.1 star for character design.firstly very little explanation of the core character and finally as the story progresses it looks like a side character.second. some side characters disappeared without any explanation at all.third. looks like an author wants to keep his characters mysterious. but ultimately making the characters seem unimportant in the story because the author pointing that mindset of the main character is the core of the storyline.1 star for world background.world background is really bad. because the author is only concerned with the turn of the story that I mentioned in the development of the story.this is the review without mention the author's view.*my original language is not english. so forgive me if i am wrong with the english.
Possibly one of the worst novels I have ever read. it makes me want to cry my self to sleep from the pain, but yet stay awake and suffer. I hate it, it lied to me. It wasted my lifespan it stole from me. I deserve to be paid for this. I need compensation. I have suffered
I liked the idea behind this. I hope more chapters come out soon.Does anyone have any idea when more chapters will be released? Or how long it usually takes before a light novel that loses the ‘vote trial read thing’ starts releasing new chapters?