Well as I was reading ist I got a mega headache, there are brainless people left and right and so on I like the genre but this novel is the worst I have read so far.
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The story seems to be some type of darker imitation of second coming of gluttony and some other novels. The plot and the personality of the main character are always being forced. World building is decent though. Grammar is also ok but there are quite a few typos here and there and needs some editing. Well tldr: give it a try but it mostly caters to a niche group of people.
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The synopsis and the initial chapters show some potential for a good book. It is a nice concept. I believe it wil be quite entertaining. However, work on some grammatical issues. Keep on working on your story.
Pretty boring. Lame basic fantasy stuff. Everything is working his way even tho he should be weak as f. Items have no requirements, he can oneshot a tank lv30 at lv 11. And how can there not be a female beast companion? Of course there is one. Let's not talk about the fake reviews that appeared 2 hours ago for the 5 star rating. This novel is at 3.5 at best.
The story is soooooo...good. I never expected to read such an amazing work. So keep up the good work..??