Hey good story idea ?.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , ? he would have been assassinated?️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.
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Come on man, your locking chapters that have already been translated by someone else behind a paywall with no guarantee that you are going to be translating any further. At this point, I am nearly sure that you just used the other translator's work and tweaked a few words here and there for every chapter.
Solid world building. Love the prehistoric start, it makes the start very unique! It is nicely written, not too hard on the eye. Like the novel very much!
Passive writing style same for the character. Story development is okay?The concept of the character and the world is pretty interesting and all, but there are lots of holes when in comes to some details that aren't told at all that makes it passive. I felt like I needed to make my own details in my head. so yeah that's pretty much it...Concept of being a vlogger and getting stronger is nice but the system is like how do we say this... It feels like it's new born it's missing lots of things. The power level of characters feel so different when I try to compare them with the side characters. Ranking of power is pretty badly made ig, Mc also doesn't keep his surrounding in check which kind of annoys me, for my personal opinion that is.
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Y'know, as a woman I love a good story. As myself I love video games. This books really compliments and balances both aspects! I've enjoyed understanding the characters and reading the plot. I look forward to reading more~
This story is well written and doesn't really have any grammatical errors which makes for an easy read, however for me this story was just dull and brainless ,all the characters seem to have an IQ of about 50 and the mc is just so mind numbingly stupid it gave me a headache ,the actions of most characters remind me of the trashy Chinese novels full of young master face slapping and a secret mysterious family hiding in the shadows for no apparent reason ?
good story , its wholesome , the mc isnt a beta also there are a lots of spicy scenes the female leads arent annoying however there are a few gramatic problems but thats alright
La historia es muy buena, el desarrollo del MC también mejoró mucho su carácter, lo unico si la emisión un poco deficiente pero bueno??????
the writer of this novel is amazing wow it's enjoyable I wish i can read the whole book but have no coins but I love it it's great thanks you