Adam look at Bleiz. "Can you create another clairvoyant image in the projection monitor? But this time, don't include the flow of aura emitted by the materials we already gathered. Just put the aura of the materials we still doesn't have, and also, can you make the projection in the condition that everytime we absorb a material, the aura of that particular material will automatically vanish in the projection monitor."
I'm rewriting the whole story and now you will be presented with a brand new story though the setting will remain the same. So, I request you guys to give the story a chance.
The Origin Elves are humanoid creatures who have the strength, intelligence and magical affinity of a dragon as well as the endless potential to evolve and grow strong and adaptability of a human.
Tomorrow I'll head to the Plaza and get my advancement, then I'll finally get to pick out an Art like what Gris used!
The story is nice. Not your typical reincarnation or transmigration story (though I love reading this genre). The female MC has a strong personality and extremely talented in her field of expertise. The story, similar to others, circled around revenge. And romance (ofc).The translations are superb and the updating is stable. I appreciate how the translator interacts with the readers and answers questions.
Anyone know where is our novel trials? did it get cancelled?
Well, I don't really write reviews that much but here is my take. The story is solid. Worldbuilding is gradual and not just a huge dump, and MC isn't exactly a "arrogant young master ready to defile every jade beauty underneath the vast sky."Although, one thing that--kind of--ticked me off was the gradual use of Ai in later chapters. I didn't really bother checking but that is what my gut told me, since I have also used chatGPT for various purposes. But eh, other than that, if you can ignore the obvious flaws in the narrative and a few oversights, it's a pretty fun read. + grammar and writing style is also pretty decent. Well decent would be an insult, it's actually good. Hmmm...that's it, I suppose. See ya in some other book. P.S I am writing this review after getting caught up with the free chaps. For some reason my fast passes are not working on PC, so will read more and maybe edit my review later on when I have my phone on me. Cheers.
To be honest I feel like this belongs to the sci-fi genre right next to galactic dark net... I don't know how I feel about this novel right now (would change the review later if I could) I like the characters world background is good but story development is kinda wonky because suddenly he lost his ticket then blah blah blah and I feel like it doesn't explain it clearly and goes too fast but that's just my opinion I feel like the translation quality is excellent though.
buena obra de ficción. una buena historia y buen argumento. Recomendado
Review time!The author has a strong voice throughout the story, and the protagonist definitely comes across as having a troubled past. Plot-wise, starting in the middle allowed for opening up to some pretty intense action, and sets up a nice and deep exploration of the main character. I think there's great potential for a character-driven exploration of the themes and politics that put the protagonist in such a terrible situation.On the technical side, there are mostly some issues with tense-case and a few misspellings, but nothing a good round of editing won't fix. Some of the dialogue can get a little confusing without indicators of who is speaking, and the extra space could be used to add little actions, facial expressions, etc.Overall I would say that the character interactions are great, but the dialogue can be a little anime-esque in terms of sudden dramatic increase.A solid start, and I'm sure once Nekoman finds his feet, it'll be off to the races.
This is simply an amazing webnovel… I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!
when I read the other reviews, I cannot wait to start reading this story. After going through 5 chapters, I can't wait for more. Author, please update soon..