change the cover. that might be the reason why it doesnt get much votes for weeks. the cover gives a bad impression. the vibe gives impression that its not good a read.
This is my first review.OK where do I start from...... hmmmm.Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point.I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy. There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better. The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.
the only bad thing about this webnovel is the author stopped writing it. from the plot, to the characters, it is well rounded and well written. the background on the fantasy world is deep, without forcing information onto you. the MC's growth and personality evolves slowly and at a reasonable pace, and the supporting characters are both well planned and unique.
This is an awesome story! Definitely worth spending the coins on. Pretty sure you wouldn’t regret it. Just started reading it 2 days ago and already at current. So I hope the updates are stable.
this guy invayne too good at writing. bet you in english class, he’s always ahead of everybody. i enjoy your stories and keep up the good work
Great Novel liked the concept , I hope it's quality won't go down..........................................................................................................
Hey guys,I have read the story until Chapter 684 before it was taken from gravitytales.com and I can assure you that the storyline, the background of characters and the sudden twist and turns will just get better and better :)The start is a little rough, yes, but once the main character gets a little stronger, he will meet a lot of interesting characters who will also develope, have depth and beautifully described skill sets!I dont understand why Webnovel just stays at Chapter 635, since the novel had way above 850 translated chapters in Patreon before the removal from gravitytales.Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story, I have followed it for close to 1,5 years and it never let me down.Cheers,LotusBtw: Just google 'toc qidian' and find a nice suprise... ;p
ok at first when i saw the rating as 4.2... i thought .. man at last there is a good novel from the new ones released... then when i read the first chapter...info dump... then i thought may be just 1 chapter.. the next fucking 5 chapters.. more info dump and the chapters are like a fucking documentary abt how that mc became a god with a time skip of abt 1million years? cmon.. GUYS this novel sucks BIG TIME... i donno y ppl rated this a 5 star.. i think those must be the fake accounts from QI or the translators... haha.. grow up qi.. u can do better then creating fake accounts and giving 5 star rating just to increase the novels rating.. m not telling lies.. haha see the newest comments and you will know.. this novel is SHIT...Also there is no light sabers... fu QI for giving us this stupid novel..
For years I'm looking for this novel! Modern, Harem, No superpowers, Good x Evil MC, And of all the things the novel itself and it's story is good!!! Writing quality; top notch! Story development; Not too fast nor slow!Character design; You'll feel attached to every one of them!updating stability; 1 chapter dailyworld background; We have a clear view of it. a modern world!
I was expecting slice of life or a light-hearted read about a dad and his daughters, not continuous face slaps after face slaps and face slaps. Why is the Father low key? To continuously face slap his opponents. Did I mention that he has the cliched check-in system as well. ????
pretty good so far, i'd say give it a chance if you're interested at all, i currently feel like the pace needs to pick up a bit but overall its a good read
it's full of Bullsh it and very inconsistent throughouteither the writer is dumbsht or thinks readers have way below average IQ and have zero reasoning thou the cheat was quite good but never used in the way the it's name suggests