ViadhivanRanatao7L
Make the MC cold mc, indifferent mc, evil mc, unfriendly mc, lonely mc, or rational mc, with no romance, no harem, no girls, and no poisons
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Okay, okay, I really don't know why a book like this isn't swarming up wiith readers yet, guess cause it just starting though.
At first I was like.. Yeah, okay, a system book, sounds thrilling, but the moment I read the plot, it really changed everything, literally ??
My mouth is widened, I really, really don't know how to describe the love I have for this book, am just loving this ??
I mean, c'mon, just two chapters I have read so far and this book is just wow...
like men, this is so goooood ??...
The plot alone already did it all, eye catching, it drew my attention in the book...
Author I feel like am possessed with it, I really do love this book, a lot ??...
So glad it already has like a 50 chapter already, can't wait to binge read this, chapters here I come ??
I have no problem with it, it really deserves the five stars
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his is really a work of art. Here we really see how a bad person should be portrayed, a true villain is like a Joker with super powers and fully aware of what he does, I feel the loyalty because the protagonist is portrayed as a pure sociopath and I also see many underdeveloped potential in the story. unfold in countless ways. I feel anxious for what is to come. (PS: author, please don't screw this up.)
Love this story!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Damage control has me hooked! More from this author please. The plot is intriguing right off the bat!
I really like this novel because its really well written. I gave it a try until it was time to drop it. The character design really got on my nerves, I HATE harems but I gave this one a pass because the world building was so amazing. But when the author started throwing in those god awful tropes of the MC falling into harem member no.2's breast, I metaphorically rolled my eyes so hard they fell out. After getting near to chapter 46 and finding myself getting more and more irritated at the MC's naive antics, I thought to myself would I pay to read this book if I'm already not finding this book as fun, That answer would be a RESOUNDING HELL FREAKING NO!!!
I just heavily disliked it.
Welcome Back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Its always fun to read your booksThis one is Gold as the rest of them and hope that you restart the other two as well after some time!!!!!!
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Extremely high standard grammar for a novel on Qidian.And don't take those words lightly.When I was reading the first chapter, what my mind noticed was how smooth I could read the novel even more than the story at that point.THEN I noticed the story. The author obviously has a plan for this. I even went to deviantart to get a closer look at the map.If this clues anything, it's that you can expect a well thought out, grammatically good story with expansive world-building in the future.Even considering the small plot holes, JUST the readability of this novel gives it a five stars. Keep writing my man, and keep doing it for a long time :D
Shameless author here! I am trying to write a story that you can appreciate, my post schedule may be a little inconsistent but I wont give up on this if you guys dont give up on me!!
