❤️❤️❤️ I miss reading your work. Thank you for this one. It's wonderful as usual ??
This definitely got potential. In terms of plot writing, it seems to be establishing itself quite nicely and am excited about the overall world building.Hope you execute it nicely.
the chapter' s writing and story is so good that I got addicted now I am craving for more ... author you have to give us new chapters continuously...... please .....and don't drop it from the middle .
Hey, author here. Thanks for supporting me through the end because of that I will make the 20th chapter the best and intriguing one so far. Pls be expecting it. Also, I just resumed school so update won’t be as frequent but I will strive to put at least 1-4 chapters a week. As I promised, here is a picture of Layla in all her wickedness ?
i saw the book on chereads am Must confess that it's mind blowing
I like this. I wanted to get into a villain type mc again and this is really nice. Mc isn’t annoying and just does what is needed. Personality is also funny and the fight club reference was funny.
This book has potential so I do recommend this book.
I only hope you enjoy reading this book. And if you guys have any questions feel free to ask me.
The first few chapters are a bit slow and highly descriptive, then ‘hula’ the pace goes up and then we suddenly have fast-paced chapters with lots of new characters and events unfolding which is a lot to digest in the short time which feels better in middle of novel rather than the beginning. I feel the sentences are a bit overly descriptive which feels kinda long and a bit boring when reading it. It definitely has some funny elements to it which is good. It might be just me but I feel some words like *APPEAR*, *GLOW*, *GLARE* and *MERGE* appeared a bit awkward. It felt like the world development and side character are overly prioritized than the main character as I found we get the mention of mc only after a few chapters. Still, you can see that the author has done a lot of research to include the gods of many different regions trying to blend them into one world. Overall, this novel has good potential but needs a bit of improvement.
The novel was a solid 9/10, but the translator’s work made it a perfect 10/10.
Enjoying it so far, keep up the good work!
Love the story, it has a nice vibe too it. Keep up the good work ♾️⭐❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????????????????????????????????????????