janmowi
Come adventure with Yuki, make money, kick butt, and slap thots.It has a mix of everything, school life, vr games, and a princess who needs some lovin.(Ps. Be sure to vote so you can make author give extra chapters)
This is another same formula game novel. So basically, as with all game novels, the mc gets a hidden class or something from the start of the game and becomes op. Then he Beats all monsters and players, becoming number 1. That’s it. Gg
This is totally a bland story without even containing a little bit of comedy and romance. It has no originality of its own. There's no color in this story. Simple MC levels up kill mobs converts gold to real currency and then level up and this **** goes on and on. I fucking can't simply understand author's line of thought. He tries to make MC keep his identity hidden but at the same time he makes him a top player. He wants to earn as much as possible given the opportunity but at the same time he rejects all the offers to earn big. He gave MC 2nd chance(reincarnation) too early(three years) to do any good **** and then made him choose a ****ty progression class "Thief". Author contradicts himself too much. He forgets things. His naming sense sucks which destroys the mood of a readers immediately. He forgets what **** he has written. I'm too disappointed in this story. Moonlight sculpture is way better than compared to this ****ty story. Well there are lot of things I wanna know and criticize about but I have become too numb to ask or comment on anything written by all the authors who only know to write dumb things.
It's a very interesting novel, I just hope that the mc would be able to create a more unique and unexpected combination of monster instead of the overused ones.
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While the grammar makes it hard to read, this book has a lot of potential .
Good so far..More chaps when???stupid character limit.AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Not bad but the sign in thing is overdone now and so is the cross dressing love interest thing.
well after read in raw about 100 chaps. The story isnt unique at all. while the first 40-50 chaps are okay. later its just your average typical cn mc. Get the system, get power, find an average enemy, kill enemy, later enemy's friends/family/clan bla bla join in, beautiful female with low IQ getting close to mc. Mc gets arrogant and become magnets for low IQ enemy.Congratulation, this is just PERFECT for lowering IQ readers
Story is causing me to lose brain cells.So he wants to show his AI to the world insgead he shows design drawings. is he showing them the coding? I don’t he is as that would be dumb and would take hours for the worlds best programer just to skim through the general outline of the program.World background 1 star as has magor lopholes.Story developments, 1 star as MC shows up in conference empty handed with just plans for some theoritical AI design (he doesnt even have an actual AI) and everyone is acting all shocked and awed by his pie in the sky.
only if you truly understand the intention and feel connection from the novel wil.you understand it, so I rate this 5-star
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