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Like the title and picture the story is good so far so keep it up and the wish was cool along with the background that you made up. This novel will become a great novel in the future
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How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked!Keep it up author.
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Only read 10 or so chapters and had to stop. The story is near unreadable due to translation errors and numerous grammatical errors. This feels like it an MTL translation which could explain why the updates are fast. So overall while the premise of the story intrigued me, I find it overall too tedious to read to continue with it.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
well not bad as a story. very cliche MC lots of grammer errors (some parts are not readable) would recomend aurthor to use some kind of edting software. chapter locks start to early.
The story has a good idea, which is executed well by the author. Always makes you want to read the next chapter without hesitation. However, really bad grammar (as expected for a translated piece of work), and really and really bad character design
Up the Rating!Love your work Author-sama. Absolutely wonderful. The read isn't slow or fast-paced, it's just right. The plot and the characters keep you hooked and make you want to keep reading. Each character has a distinct personality and mindset that makes this novel better than the other cookie cutter ones on WebnovelUnlike other novels, there's no tragic backstory, no weird and half-heartedly motivation towards the goal of "Survival". This novel is a refreshing breather on Webnovel, it starts off with a few scenes of "terror" which can give us all a good laugh.This novel uses scenes from it beginning as a transition in thought in the characters, like the "terror" in the first few chapters is used as an inspiration for the character.Sorry for sounding like one of those arrogant critics but I just want to say that this has been one of the most enjoyable read of my life, and you should read this as well because you might enjoy it too!
From the beginning to the ending this book is filled with chaos. Plot: Very bad. Jumping from one style to another, no links between chapters, the only interest that i had “is the next chapter weirder?”.No description of world, characters. Tons of unnecessary text, a lot of holes in plot and, of course, the worst setting i have ever seen.