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Interessante e emocionante.Gosto de como o mundo vai se desenvolvendo.Os personagens são únicos e a dinâmica entre eles é saudável, gosto também dos personagens secundários que tem um desenvolvimento apesar de que lento porém coerente.
Bro please don't have any 18+ scenes in this novel, if possible add more comedy and parody
I just hope that this version continues to be updated after reaching the bottom of the other one, because lately the author only writes that, the other few I leave aside, the rest is a very good story.
just reading the plot I'm confused on how she was betrayed when it was her sister man first.
i think plot is good .but story progression is too artificial and forced ,i get that you want character to be mysterious but every character felt too cringed. you should improve your writing quality . it seems like you want to write in detail but forced to shorten them which make it bad .
I know the author and accompanied her in her 2 other books. I could say that her grammar and writing style has improved a lot. Her stories are always unique and this is my first time to try a story about transmigration. Surprisingly, I like it. I highly recommended this novel.
love the storyline. But can you try making it a bit not too easy for the MC. Besides that this story is op and dope
Manhwa only had about 14 chapters, glad i found this
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j’ai aimé le personnage d’Arima Tenbatsu et surtout son duo avec le colonel ,l’histoire est intéressante et a de l’intrigue de plus en plus on continue à lire le livre , je vous le consei4
I'm so hooked, I like how the story had been progressing. Though it's a slow paced story it is easy to understand and follow. Looking forward to more chapters more character development.??
