If there's a typo in the summary it is already a bad sign. The fact that it's barely an excuse to write some stupid harem is worse. Give up writing, go outside, touch grass.
Let these dogs remind you, horniness should be removed. Let them serve as a reminder that being horni is not good and in the end, let them bonk you if you ever get horni.
In all honesty the mc is writtwn to be hated for most of the beginning with his views and attitude on how he shouls live his life, but the author does an amazing job introducing different factors that help build character and make the reader change their disgust to actual admiration if you read further than the surface level of the mc’s actions. Great read but chapter got to pump out more!!!!! There is way too much that has to happen and the author gotta start thoomin cause Its a great story.
Waste of time and effort. As soon as the tournament arc comes it's like a completely different author takes over. Cliches and a complete lack of effort in utilizing the "system".
Will wait until 50+ chaps before Reviewing. Main concern for me is update stability but well see. Seems pretty pog so far. Soooooo, keep it up!
just a free advice if you like take it or just leave it . please don't these reader's advice affect your story . don't include unnecessary things like romance and all those stuff . especially harem these things are like fire if don't written well it will destroy your entire story but If you have confidence and a well directed plot then to i advice to be cautious. please don't these reader's affect the way you think they are here to read your story not to direct your story and most important do listen effective things and critic but not trash . and in the last thankyou for your efforts ?
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Okay, so I needed a dictionary more than I'd like to admit when I started reading this. The plus though is that it's real English with very few colloquial terms and the way the writer writes is not like many of the stories I've read (I've only read 280-odd stories on this site so if there are others please do not come at me). I love the main character. The pureness of her soul is reflected straight off the bat. I love how the story reminds one about judging people based on appearance alone. It definitely ain't a read for lazy readers but the chapters are nice and long and the characters have depth.
I enjoyed reading the novel but only for some time because of some spellings and words are not good enough so it makes it boring
I’ve only read up to chapter 7 so far but It’s pretty interesting. The MC just needs a wake up call to push him to grow stronger and things are looking good. I’m looking forward to what the author has in store for us with this novel. I’m pretty excited for this one and I am expecting great things from this great author. ??
update: the novel is paused ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
im getting some serious deja vu rn, oh wait it's a complete copy pasta of someone else's work. go figure. and he actually made it locked at ch.6 LOL