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I think the relationship between yun wu and long quing xie is bad as she ask and demands for too much not even caring about his feelings,always looking from her perspective a relationship can only develop if both side contributes, I do understand that she is the Mc but this is romance if she cannot give him his deserved respect she does not deserve him so author do better
This story is very bad. Not recommending this to anybody at all. The characters and te plot are so so.
This is just me but i feel like the "hmph" ruins the supposed emotion of the character everytime. Why always add it.
Some scenes feel like exactly copied and some feel like changed and some scenes original but i want some more focus on james shaw the scion of one of the elite family
"A LOT & LOTS OF POTENTIAL" is how I will describe this novel, great novel_ top tier 'WRITING QUALITY'- my favourite part is - ' his PERSONALITY '
In my opinion, it's quite smooth and I can keep on reading because it gives me good vibes, not too stressed. Not only boys, but girls can also read this as well. The main story is about using the power of each card to fight each other. Moreover, aside from the battle, it also uses the brain a lot as well hahaha. That makes me root for them throughout the story, like, what will be going on next when they pick those cards? Anyhow, another thing I like is that the story is not looping, but progressing. Such a cool novel!
It gives what it promises, the only things I would change would be given the characters a little more dept, some backstory or flaws, and show some images of them so we can get a better idea of how they look given that they descriptions are good but not complex, just my opinion though
Definitely, the author indeed noted that English is not his first language even so, he had do so great with the right diction to describe the event of this book. The world background is great and the story development is excellent. The writing technic is over all great and I easily recommend this book to everyone.
I already understood how the story will be from the moment there were 2 chapters about an unnecessary fight...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Wow i already read the first 20 chapters and i was not disappointed it is beautiful. I love the story line i pray for the author to have more inspiration
well, I haven't read it but the tag is NTR so Nah it's not my cup of tea. But still, I'll give you 5 stars and if you ask why? Cause I am in a good mood...well, kidding, just treat it as compensation. I will shamelessly promote my novel here.Just search, His Eternal Aspiration. It's cultivation and r-18 and much more (I mean plot-wise.) You will surely enjoy the story and its characters. Though for now, only 20 chaps are out. (vol 1 is complete.):Dand author if you don't like this then just delete this review. But I already gave ya 5 stars~Btw I would like to salute you for writing 200+ chaps even after getting so many bad reviews.
