This is an incredibly fresh story and way better than what I expected coming in.You need to add more in the description about the amazing mysteries which are in this story. I expected a somewhat boring slice-of-life story but what I got was an intriguing mystery about meritocratic high schools and secret human experiments.Amazing, I need more!
Amazing ? love this great work author you did a good job especially with the character building I really connected with this book so please keep up the good work
Really like the book, author keeps his update schedule consistent. good book and author
I am amazed. I have been continuously reading this novel…. I can’t put it down. Story is good, the scope of the universe building is good, and the characters are still being themselves is good. The only difficulty I am experiencing is the multitude of cultivation realms and remembering them. There are a lot and the names aren’t easy to remember. Otherwise, this is a terrific novel.
A nice fast pace novel that surprisingly flows really well and the author manages to bring everything together rather quickly. I hope you manage to keep updating and don't drop.
This story would be good if it was properly edited. I understand why other reviews call it a MTL, i.g. it is barely readable. I understand how it may be unique, but consider My German Empire and Out of Space. These novels do this concept way better.
A very good LN for people who like MMO LN.Very good points (general): - Story and story development- Characters - In game Character design- Reality story is interessting, well balanced and not "too much"- The author really tries to have originality in some aspectGood point (for me) :- More PVE oriented than PVP- MC is overpowered but he is not the only one- Secondary characters have a real utility Bad points :- not foundNeed improvements points (for me) : - Writing sometimes repeats the same thing a little too much - but the author could easily remove that by putting a little more description of the item, character level, region background etc. - We can see that the author wants a balanced story (A overpowered MC who has shortcomings and who needs to progress) and it works but one or two "epic situation" are welcomed (currently Chapter 293)- [SPOILER WARNING] A little too much luck for the MC friends and family . Hidden races and job are said to be very rare... in fact, the author had a great idea for his best friend (giving hidden job because of the MC jobs) but who know why he hasn't exploited it more.
This is a strange novel with all the elements that should make it an awful book..1) Brutal and violent tsundere FL2) Dumb male lead3)Omnipotent systemAND YET!!!I could not stop reading this novel once I started it!10/10 would recommend
The world is perfectly planned out and we have a good feel of the universe they are in, the cast is really enjoyable and the game dynamics are just dope af.
don't read this, there are 20000 novels like this one in the webnovel that have the same story and have more chapters so why waste time reading this one? PICK ANOTHER PLEASE
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