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Although there are a few tweaks you need to make in the world background and the character design, the story overall is fresh and has a huge amount of potential so keep it up
An interesting story, long chapters, beautiful formulation of the characters, and I must say that the thinking of the characters is beautiful as a beginning of the story. I look forward to more chapters. Keep it up, author.
Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward.
1) Poor grammar, but readable.
2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense.
3) Too much cringe lines.
4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything.
5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators.
6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure.
Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates.
It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.
Han Xiao would like some of that luck of yours.
So far its got an interesting direction and, plot developments, characters interactions and overall world building elements. Let us see how it progresses
This is the great novel of Teachers. This novel has broken the tradition of cliche Transmigrated Teachers novel of teaching method. The novel has gr8 orignal idea.
I have read this work all the way until the second volume,and right now, I’m so speechless. I love it so far. The author has included all, or most of all, the things needed to write a book of this caliber. It includes betrayal, death, tough decisions, plot twists, the loss of loved ones(not death but like how Kira and his father disappeared), and is overall a rollercoaster. Continue to write this amazing book, dear author. While I haven’t read any of the second volume, the first volume was full of such character development and personal realizations of the main character. I love how you didn’t just start the character out weak and made him a powerhouse in like a hundred or so chapters but you kept throwing hardship after hardship at him making him stronger in the process. While he did get stronger among his peers, he didn’t show off nor did he become overpowered. He kept a low profile and slowly, but surely, climbed the ranks to what he was at the end of the first volume. At the end of the volume, I love how Arthur realized that the power he has was not given by Jizo nor that it wasn’t the inheritance’s power, but his power that has been awaken by Jizo. I also love how there was an internal battle between the fragment of Jizo’s soul and Arthur at the end. Just wanted to say keep it up author. You’re doing great!
Fun with you guys and the other is a quick visit to get it hentaiu you are doing great and time that you are not feeling well so I will be able you are not going out to eat with us for a while but I will not going
This is a nice fix with a manipulative mc who isn't too detached and actually has friends.
Decent use of the power system , however it could be described as a very loose slave system
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The whole fiasco with him not getting the midnight storm eyes was Pretty annoying and seemed out of place to ?
Couldn't get past chapter 10....this novel is just trash. Its attempts at comedy are just horrible, the MC is extremely unlikable. Just stay away from this one...
At first, I thought this novel would be another boring redo novel, but the more I read it, the better it seemed to me. I suggest you don't judge a book by its cover on this one. I'm sure you won't regret it. Trying to read it won't kill you anyway