I'm disappointed. I Read until Chapter 165 but become so bored of the story developed... There were few Dialogue and so slowwww? I like the story lbut this is not my Cup of tea. ...? ... ... .. .F. .. D. DD. D. .d. D
Written at chapter 126: Honestly, this novel so far is very VERY good. Practically all aspects blend together perfectly and leave me wanting more chapters. The power system is unique with extremely interesting and cool abilities and the world itself has a lot of potential for expansion. The MC is a really nice blend of emotional and logical, although there are 1 or 2 situtations where I’m like ‘wtf’, they serve to make him more relatable. I would give this novel a 4.8 currently. Now, one may ask, why not a 5/5? It’s due to a pet peeve of mine, and also the only thing I have found to dislike so far to the point of annoyance. It is how puppet-like the MC gets treated by the higher existences. Don’t get me wrong, it doesn’t necessarily take away from the story or ruin the reading experience from what I’ve read so far…it’s simply annoying. If they don’t want him to make a certain decision, they will quite literally force him do something else and he, quite literally cannot do anything about it lol. I can’t into detail without spoiling some things but it’ just something I dislike personally, nothing too big. It’s happened a few times so far and they led to cool/interesting things so I won’t complain too much ?u200d♂️Overall: I don’t want to make is sound like the novel has a glaring flaw, as it’s probably something small or unimportant to most, so definitelty give this novel a try as the story so far is really good and the potential is among the best on Webnovel imo. You definitely wont regret it
It's good. The writing is decent (but could be improved). The story is focused on romance (which is always welcomed). His disciples aren't all or majority females who are in love with him (which I noticed a lost of these kind of stories have a tendency to do). He's not overt with his abilities though that might not be for long considering this latest chapter. The cultivation is very convoluted and confusing. Why didn't they just go with the generic cultivation system. One annoying thing is how the writer keeps on shoving it in your face that the MC is a genius. "but of course Li blah blah is x100 time more talented so his cultivation and learning is way faster so he learnt this in half a day even though it would take them years" on repeat. Keep in mind they are talking about so called S and SS-class talents. I'm just waiting for the story to introduce SSSSS-class talents at this point. This talent system is going to become redundant at some point honestly.
As of this moment I already have read up to where the locked chapters are (around chapter 56), so I think it's already enough to write an initial review. So, the pros about this novel is that it is written comprehensively. There are little to no technical errors such as incorrect grammars and spellings. Next is that it has little bit of a blend of other genres with eastern fantasy at its base, and don't get me wrong, I like this kind of creativity. Now for the cons, although it is already that promising from its pros, the novel is not that immersive as I thought it would be. The cultivation realms was explained in the novel but the cultivation system was not properly explained. There are no information about the cultivation techniques or battle techniques the characters used. The fights are so short, few ,and lack a lot details. It lacks the thrill of what a eastern fantasy novel is known for. It's pace is like a wish fulfillment fanfic just on a lesser degree. And although it was creative of blending other genres in a vast setting such as eastern fantasy, the novel already restricted itself by focusing more on destiny destiny what not. It kind of limited its potential. And btw, this is just my own opinion and experience in reading the novel. It is not the sole truth about this novel. Others or you might think or experience differently compared to my thoughts on the novel. So, be mindful of that.
Reviewing this at 15 chapters that are out so far.. I don’t write reviews unless this novel is good, that being said this is my second real review. To start the whole ‘cultivation’ system is pretty unique in my opinion and I’m excited to see how it works throughout the rest of the novel. I also like how the characters are explained and fleshed out so far and world building can’t really be considered very much but so far we have somewhat of a good background of the empire the Draco family rules as well as the powers within. I’m really looking forward to this novel to take off with more chapters and have high expectations for this novel so far. Keep up the good work author, thank you!
I mostly read more about romance but this book was nice, with the few chapters I've read, I found it worth reading. A good job done by the author
The words and sentences are written are clear and understandable. The story itself carries out a well-developed plot that arouses the curiosity of the readers. It feels really good to read a story like this. and after a long while, I feel like I want a spoiler about what's going to happen next. I cant wait to see the next chapter.Author, you are so talented. please write more and more in the future.
good read the last book I read was Harry potter and it unfortunately came to a end so I was browsing and came across this book the title and the guy wearing a hat attracted me to the cover I can honestly say this is the best book after a long time thanks author
Gives me a little bit the feeling of the tutorial is too hard. The Mc gets no choice but to pick the most difficult mode even harder then the most difficult mode open for public.
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it's as if a ten year old child wrote this. there are a few things wrong with it but what really makes it unreadable to me is how delusional the author is. its unrealistic that a government would name a group of people with supernatural powers the "superhero association" or what ever it's called. I actually wasted some time reading it hoping it would get better but it didn't. I also assume that the balance of power is highly unbalanced considering only one percent don't have powers but the police can't take care of one criminal. who's only motive I know for causing chaos is because he is perhaps bored? cause he thinks that even though he isn't a world class power that he can seriously get away with it? that's simply unreasonable and unrealistic. this whole novel is probably trash if the rest is anything like the first few chapters.
don't know anything about this novel but after seeing locked chapters for what is a fanfic. this doesn't even deserve 1 star. I don't know how this is even legal since it's stolen godzilla as well as stuff from op and I bet other anime/manga as well but I guess it's not the first time I've seen stuff that was stolen in what I can only guess is a cn novel and wanting to make money off it I just don't know how they haven't been sued for this kinda stuff yet