Cool concept, but you should make it more clear who is talking or it's just thought
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the story has a great start and a lot of potential
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It's not just a novel , it's a rousing success ,a very vibrant and wonderful book , with well tailored worlds and great characters , awesome work
My review as of right now. I am currently enjoying this story, as someone who is still making his way through the authors other work, I feel that this story has quite a few concurrent themes between that story and this one, that's not to say its bad, because regardless of a few overused cliches centered on the protagonists looks, they do not detract from the story in any way.I have noticed maybe one or two grammatical faults as or the latest chapter, but none that are immersion breaking as they are very minor. So far, the only part of the story that I'm not overly fond of, is the fact the the protagonists name changes to something that I feel doesn't really flow as well as his original name, which in the grand scheme of things is more of a personal gripe, than a fault with the story because the author explained the reason for the change and the lore behind the new name in a way that keeps it accurate withing the world itself. In conclusion, I'm very much enjoying my time with this story, it's characters are entertaining and it's world interesting.
Good start ?keep it up. .. .. ..
shameless author here is asking you all to just read in your pace and tell me if there are mistakes or errors.I am solo in writing this story but I'm having so much fun that I want it to be perfect for you all?
Keep going mate, I'm waiting for the next chapter
Typical Cultivation-Transmigration-System trope but very well done!Recommended for those who like cunning and manipulative MC.Currently** Chapter 35
Im here to support author, but i recommend you redo the synopsis... It doesn't tells me anything at all. I have no idea what to expect of your novel with just that a dude reincarnated in a desert and got taken in by a wizard or cultivator
This novel is a real diamond Author please don't ever drop this masterpiece ? i will always support you the story just go really interesting.so keep up the good work author and thanks for the novel.?