was killled by invisible dragon
you all should read this if you don't your a foool!!!!sorry about that so sorry your not a fool
I knew the gender because of the character sheet, but the fact that the author doesn't reveal it til ch 20 is just bad and shameless, nothing really happens for like 20 chapters as well and it's incredibly boring, and when she got shadow powers and the author starts referencing solo leveling repeatedly, i cant help but roll my eyes, chose the lamest power possible for a fantasy world, not to mention she chooses a reincarnation option to where she gets her powers little by little... why? it states so she does not get overwhelmed, but what I'm hearing is, o just cuz the story wouldn't work when I get them all, it's just so incredibly lame, good first 3 chapters and then has the quickest fall off of all time
Sure a very nice book ? I love love love itThanks My fav author Anita beauty ♥️??✅❤️Following you on all socials am your number 1 fanHope you notice me!!
A great story for any starting reader. The lore and concept is interesting and well researched. Give it a try, you won't regret it.?
I expect my readers to participate, now i'm rereading my own story :)I find it interesting too, what do you think about it?Please let me know what you think, so that I can improve my book.Thank you!
The book is good and the story is also good. It takes a lot of hard work to write a book, I know it because I am also a writer.You should write like this it will make it easier to read."Hi, are you new here," the girl asks."no, I have been working here for over a year now," the boy said.It should be like this.
Pretty good context of the story, the grammar needs a little bit tweaking but the word choice is good, Also the act scenes need a little bit tweaking too
Interesting premise already for a book that's just starting. ML stories aren't always my cup of tea but I quite like this one so far. An MC who holds a dark system yet doesn't seem to be an antihero or at least.... not yet?Pacing for the story thus far is good as is updating stability. Characters are also interesting, looking forward to following along with their story and seeing how they continue to develop as the story progresses.
CONTINUE AND GOOD LUCK
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