mc is an asshole. The rest of the story seems ok. His actions defy common sense. Trying not to let anything slip about the story, to leave this review.
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it is very interesting I love how Fu Jui personality in the story. I also like the other characters in the story. The hot and cold relationship was also my favorite part of the story. I am very excited on how the characters unravel the secret and how they will react.
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severely disappointed so I give you a happy little 1 star for ruining the story in less than 10 chapters . and now I'm filling up space so I can post.
NOICE, hopefully you keep this novel going consistently, wish you all the best so you don't drop it. 140 Characters is a stupid thing, this is a fricken pain in the ass AHHHHH
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I loved the story but I wish the writer will update more. I ready want to read the next one. I also loved how powerful the MC is. It is so much fun and again I still wish the Writer will update more.
Well past the 1st 10 chps it's pretty generic ig , don't mind , I read something similar a while ago , I mean these tropes and ginks r bound to be repeated after all , still pretty fun read
cool concept. Nice novel to spend downtime. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this gets a complete translation and isn't dropped in the middle. although it's far from a masterpiece but this is decent enough to pass time at least from the 40 chaps I have read till now.