From what I've read so far, the story
In the little details is appealing to read
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this is my first time seeing so many negative comments on a novel ? and I also join them when we have to pay from chapter 9 itself
I am writing this review only after 18 chapters, so it may change?. A warlord,who is getting humiliated from stage 1,? Even if it's in the name of lifesaving grace, there should be limits.. Also what's with the family constantly blocking his sword for their enemies ?. Just not my cup of tea. I had great expectations but this was frustrating . That's why I wrote this review ?.
Author please can you write a auxiliary chapter on the magic system of this novel including mystic gem, elixier field and soul ranks, slots for magic gems and all, please that would solve many problems of the readers as they can understand it better beforehand. And please also explain which magic talent absorb how much mana from the consumed resources with little details in single auxiliary chapter. I liked the novel very much. but please release the chapter if you find my suggestion good enough. And give reply to this review so i can understand your reason of not releasing such chapter before. And thank you for giving such masterpiece.
to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very niceCharacter: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..updatig stability: I don't know!world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!
I read up to 78 and quit at 78. Even though the author said that he doesn't like girls who blush at everything, I read until 78 and there are girls who blush at everything and your understanding of romance is really bad (a girl with little acquaintance sees the main character while fighting and is affected. Then she kisses the main character without saying anything and has a happy ending) to say I would like the author, this is not rheumatism, this is a scene set to impress adolescents, I left it in 78. If there is such a scene, it exists in the future. Author, I hope you don't delete the comment. (I'm sorry if there are wrong words, my native language is not English)
A clever and well written, exciting story! It has a good mix between romance and politics, adventure and mysteries. This is the story that the tv show is loosely based on and which is good, but the novel is even better for sure. I find the translation very good as well, It has a good flow and vibrant language!I can’t wait to be able to read the whole story as I know there is a lot left!
Captain Usopp's was killed on the way to Laugh Tale and see his sweetest dream in the underworld, lol. Pitiful parody of Path to Power.So boooooooring.
It's boring. .
Hi, I'm the author of the adventurer system! Also, this is a shameless review.first of all, I don't have much vocabulary so some words are repeated, but I guarantee you that I already made each arc of the story. I admitted that there are some grammatical issues, but don't blame me English is not my native language hahaha! I will try to fix it as soon as possible.About Drake? All question has the answer, so stay tuned. To the readers, read my work I hope you enjoy it, I'm really glad this is the reason why I keep writing, thank you!
I've only read up to chapter 17, all I can say this novel is absolutely hilarious, the author did such a good job on making the characters. Albeit there are mistakes, this novel is so good. I highly recommend it.
Well you need to be better at writing it Though it has flaws but still keep it up bro The story is great but you need better prologue the writing is A mess but at least the story is good so do your best!