how do I start this one...Guess I could go with, the story is about a tribe in a possibly alternative version of the past earth (why only possibly is cause we have no idea what life was genuinely like back then, only little tid-bits where understood) during the middle of the stone age. when you look at it from the point of view of a modern life, you see something too out of place. overall 10/10... just needs a bit of refining and a little bit of extra world building, and it will be perfect ?
Author you should keep up the good work I'm really hooked to this novel ?? try to update more I'm sure the novel will be successful becauseI never had seen many types of novels like this one
Thai is a very good story a matter of fact all your novels are good, I can’t stop reading these novels by you keep it up ❤️..............................
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I love this book it is addictive and interesting and is super underaited I recommend this to anyone looking for something unique or addictive I hope the author does not dropp this or get bored of writing this the author could add in new things to make it less borring like him conquering planets with his powers or with the help of others or another idea is adding kingdom building elements or going to fictional worlds or sci-fi worlds I hope the author adds in those things and I hope the author makes a 1000+ chapters
It's really well thought out and written, the pacing for each chapter is nice and it's not a info dump like some novels with a system.I wish you luck and hope you update stably.
If you read this you will get frustrated because of how DUMB the mc is its agonizing how he knows the modern cultivators are weak and suddently because of one phenomenon that coincidentaly happened after he cultivated it makes every old man an expert(to his mind) and he ignores the system he dosent use it
Honestly its a good book, but what happened to any new chapters? I don't know if it was dropped or not but I wish the author would publish some more chapters. I wish that he elaborated more in each of the previous chapters because the story went a little too fast and it could use some fleshing out.
This is a good story! I read it when it was originally uploaded and enjoyed every minute of it! I’m excited to see where the author takes book 2, although it has been frustrating to have to wait for it to come out lol. Hopefully the author release a big chunk of book 2 to start us off with a bang!
Read to chapter 39This isn't a player turns NPC into a game novel.The MC is transported into a fantasy world where he has a system based on a social browser game and that he only bought the starter pack for.He has to level up his base (Elemental Tower), summon heroes (like Dra), and build up an army of mob soldiers (Elemental Summons).As long as you've played a game that requires you to train armies and summon heroes you can pretty much understand the gist of the novel, I've only read one translation similar to this called My Doomsday City(or Fortress?) and I'm a fan of these type of novels.Overall I like it. ?? [My Doomsday City(Fortress?) doesn't have many chapters translated btw]
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If you enjoy the concept of a system, game, and good writing. This book is for you! I think the writing is very well crafted and well thought out, even the main character Tom feels very real and like an actual human being. Everyone must give this a read!