Here I am writing the first review for my own book ? This book has a unique concept and I just hope the Shounen fans find it. Imagine if your favorite Shounen Main Character was an Alien Cupid with Toxic pheromones that can turn women into zombies and that's exactly what my story LOVE YOKAI is about. Honestly I believe more people should read this book because it takes place in college and not high school and in multiple planets and the characters have strong back stories. The characters are also hot. I wish I could marry Eros but he hates humans lol .... he's also a fictional character but we can all make him our new Book boyfriend ?
I love this story chapters are consistent, but I really wish they would release more. I can’t get enough!!!❤️❤️ I love the romance between the sins and our main girl. Just wish it was a little bit more steamy?. I want to see them, heal her soul with their love. They’re already doing such a great job. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I am the author, I want you to tell me what you think of this beginning of the story, if it should continue, if you see a future, your opinions, what should be improved regarding the way of narrating, if you want more details of the environment, whatever you want. I am all ears in constructive criticism
The story is about strange events happening in the mountain, where the main character and his groyp tries to uncover dark secrets. The author builds suspense well, making the reader feel scared and curious at the same time. The creepy atmosphere and unexpected twists keep you hooked. Some parts are scary, but not too much, and the mystery makes you want to find out what happens next. It’s a good book for people who like a mix of horror and mystery.
Great ff i'm impatient to read more
Author likes ntr so much he cucked his own novel. Honestly the story was great up until the time I’m writing this at around 300 chapters. The scenes were great and I like the story, however the author basically had burnout and what I can only assume writers block. Author basically just asked what readers wanted and is now playing catch up to rewrite a revenge ending. The story now feels rushed and scenes go by fast or are mostly skipped and detailed parts feel thrown in. I have no doubt that the author had a plan for the original ending which is why parts like Carla’s scene and Leon’s backstory feel similar is quality to earlier parts but that they lost their drive and forgot most of what they were planning up until now. I hope that this doesn’t just become the author shoehorning in a bunch of women to replace the old characters but the direction seems to almost point that way with the newest introduction. Hope the author can at least deliver a satisfactory conclusion to this work or just drop it cause I don’t even want this to be just some half baked revenge story after everything that has happened in literally the whole entire book
I REALLY LOVE SYSTEM GENRES BUT ROMANCE NOT SO MUCH BUT THIS NOVEL REALLY HOOKED ME UP, EVERYTHING HAVE READ SO FAR SO FAR IS OF GOOD QUALITY , CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. GOOD JOB AUTHOR
Lot's of plots for long stories, looking forward to the upcoming chapters
Author here. This is my first novel (originally named 'Dash.'), written on a whim as a birthday gift to my younger brother (a big xianxia fan). It's completed, will be gradually posted here according to the Webnovel traditions and you, dear reader, can enjoy it till the end free of charge. I must apologize though - when I wrote it I haven't heard about Webnovel and the chapters are a bit lengthy compared to the local standards (~2x as long).Please don't be too harsh in your judgement - after all it's my first work and English is only my fourth language. I hope you'll enjoy Nick's adventures as much as my brother did ;)
wow guys. I really recommend that you read chapter 46 up to the latest, this author upgraded his work... even though it's premium, I'm sure that's what you get
I'm gonna give myself a full five stars. Yes very shameless of me but you have to be your biggest hypeman at the end of the day. Do truly let me know what you guys think of this story and how it progresses. I have a few ideas for the plot and have taken inspiration from a few different novel quite heavily, let me know if you can tell which ones.Sorry if my writing quality isn't quite up there yet but I hope you'll be patient with me and give me helpful pointers on where to go, how to proceed. How to improve. Thanks for reading Heart of Sword!
me personally i wouldn't let that slide fr