Raw :长生不死的我只练禁术.................
I do no know exactly where this is going, but as of now it is the best of the batch that I have read. It is actually fun to read and has an amusing concept, where the heroine is a regressor who has the memory of the MC turning out to be a demon lord type character. She is spending time with him, looking for evidence and trying to kill him in ways that do not implicate her or would put her at risk. The MC has a 'system' that gives him points for his activities throughout the day. For most activities he can get .01-.02 points a day. When interacting with her he finds that he gets .1 or more points for even comments that she makes to him. This means that instead of spending 12 hours to get .01 points he can spend 1 minute and get .1 point or more. He has no idea that he is being treated as a demon, while his actions are confusing his senior sister the first heroine of the story.At this point I am looking forward to reading more of this one.
It seems interesting so far. The Main Character's 'cheat' is super childish which leads to a lot of fun situations. He has a bit of a shamelessness to him that makes it even better. There's a lot of moments where he drops the jaws of those around him (in both good and bad ways), and it comes together nicely in a fun world.
Hello, is this novel finished?? It’s one of my favorite novels and I’m wondering if there is more content to come or if the book ended?
I absolutely love this book. For one thing the author of this is at least some one I can relate to since we are the same age, which kind of attracts me to the story even more, I know it's not right to like the story the author-san worked hard to write bcuz of reasons like that but it actually appreciate the story even more. Love ur story hope u never drop this but i hope u consider ur health first. Hope for all the best.
dang it looks like Webnovel abandoned this one as well just like notebook of fortune a lot of good stories get dropped while a lot of bad ones keep going on forever
First off I want to say it's rare I gave something a full 5 stars. But I couldn't find any flaw big enough to warrant a 4 star in any category.Great novel so far that has lots of things that make it differ from novels of the same type.The author seems to regularly ask for the opinions and feedback from his/her readers about what they think and what they want to see and not see in the novel.So far the MC is pretty great, hes not super meek or arrogant so far (let's hope it stays that way) So far he seems pretty normal and I can see myself reacting the same way as he does to a lot of the situations.Not sure about the romance yet as it's still early but it seems to be doing well on that front and has lots of potential. It also has pretty funny humor and I find myself laughing at most of those moments.It's managed to separate itself from all of the VR mmo novels out there and I find myself checking for a new chapter everyday.Love the novel and recommend it even if you hate VR mmos and the like!
I just hope everyone enjoys my story. Any advise on my writing or story work is well appreciated and all criticism only helps me get better at writing. Any links to useful information or other novles, leave them in the comments or in a review.
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Wow, yeah dude. Keep on updating this book. We are here to support you. good luck.
The characters lack depth. Especially the wife. I would have forgotten her if she wasn’t mentioned once in a while. The protagonist doesn’t seem to think before acting, making me wonder why he did this or that. An exemple is having the USA agents killed. It doesn’t help anyone. Also, he doesn’t seem bothered after being directly responsible for the murder of hundreds of people.The technology he is offered is way ahead of what Earth is capable, and he should have to spend a serious amount of time and ressources developing the intermediate steps. He reach those steps too easily (if he didn’t bypass them). The author should check technology trees in games such as the one who share its name with the title of this work, and remember that theory and practice/application are differents.Also, the system rewards are much to great for the tech development he completed.World background is lacking. Little to no description of the characters, surroundings, buildings and inventions.Interesting, but the execution need some work.
The novel is at the beginning, but I feel the need to comment on it, it starts in a very mysterious way and so far few answers have been answered about the nature of the protagonist's power, but it left me very intrigued in relation to its origin.