This is trash the usual with usual cliche nonsense an old man acting as a child everything revolves around the mcDon’t be deceived with the spam reviews Trash
Very good story I liked everything except the tournament good luck author and again sorry ? ✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅
I'm sure it's good one way or the other.
a bit spoilerAhem! Ahem! as I continue to read this I consider myself stopping it as I really hate how he take Selena with him, but as I read more chapters and also think about klautz pov, I started to enjoy this more than I can think, like why hate a woman if you know that she will not betray you while also do willingly what you command to her.I hate the part where Verona interfere when klautz was fighting with Eli, but thinking about it, it was really necessary to do that part as we need it to do some character development as it was boring if she suddenly became survibedient to him. so for that part you really great author.For the lemon part, you also do great at that author that I begun to think if it was based on experience GHAHHAHA but if my hunch is true can you kindly teach me sensei! There was some typo but it was so little that you will not care about it. I also like how thick skinned our mc when they were in that secret room where they first met Verona on the bonus stage. where he do the deed with Selena even she was at that room GAHHAHHA it really turn me on GHAHAHHA and from that part I know that something within Verona will be going to awaken GHAHAHHAH I'm still at the 80s chapters and it was already awesome so I expect that it was more going to get interesting when I caught up
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Great potential, the start of a progressive story, and experience. The MC starts as many of us (neets) and goes the extra mile into a place that can change the minds of the players. I predict him to participate and change while doing so.
I thought this seemed familiar, turns out there is a manga version of it.I need to write some extra characters huh, the manga seemed good so high hopes for the novel
I'm a fan of this book for a long time. It got a contract so it was a renewing stage for a few weeks. I was waiting for the new chapters. I do not need to describe this book in many words. It was in top10 action novels before the contract stage and I'm sure that it will rise up more on the list. Congratulations to Author Craig.
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Please Post More (: the novel that you wrote is one of the best that I have ever read online. So keep going, talent shouldn't just vanish. As for the viewers be sure to read this novel.
Fu*k! I do not have a formed opinion about this novel! It seems written by an 8 year old, but at the same time it seems that this child is mocking us with a superior intelligence! There is a serious problem with some chapters, sometimes 2 ~ 3 chapters pass without absolutely nothing happening! But the comedy is spectacular, and it's the "random" type! The system, as predicted by the title, is "buggiest