Liam "hey I want to hold my grandson too".
A nice start to a part of the characters development, I like how the author depicts the difficulty, and how even the protagonist must put in the concerted effort to move forward in his own progress.
nice, so far keep going, no I'll be glad to read more of your books
If it's Xianxia then it deserves a complete five star from me ?
I quite enjoy the story thus far please keep it up.
update fast and soon and never drop it everyone choice is different that's it
I think the story is somewhat very not good
not bad, but neither is it good. the book follows the reincarnation of the MC in a fantasy world. This book has the same premise as epic of caterpillar and goblin evolution. While the character is logical he is also only pseudo ethical. Basically his morals are pretty loose and his bottom line of what he will do is pretty low. Much like the books above the MC gains power by assimilation of his enemies. The MC also gains followers by saving them or forcing them to submit, he never actually wins anyone over the any other way. Based on what I've read so far, writing quality will probably start to suffer as more characters are added, as current cast already lacks depth. Writer does attempt to build side characters through doing pov chapters for them, but it all just seems like feeler material and doesn't really connect you with the character. Lastly there are alot of they that should I or him that should be I or her. Grammar errors kind of take away from the story. Over all this is a decent story that is replica of novels already on the site.
From the title I thought the MC would have three S talents, he only has one SSS talent.
It has a pretty good start????????☹️??????????????
i just happen to bump into this book but deym it was good, i love the way that you made it into a romantic story with a good background and storyline. i hope for you the best and please continue making chapters because i love it!.
Sigh. 40k views and 1 review ? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help her out won't ya? I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Ms. author!The novel is Fun to read. It Grabs hold of you and makes you want to read more. A simply a great work. A enjoyable read you don't wanna miss out on:)?????????????