I am in love with this book! ...️
Please update
I want a Derek of my own! My husband needs some training. ...
one of the best bl stories I have ever read
I like the cover en da names. Nice choice.
Do not start this book unless it’s completed. Im by “chapter” 462 and just don’t have the patience anymore for the constant back and forth. It’s just stagnant for at least the last 100 chapters. It showed so much promise in the beginning and then just lost its plot.
Loved it.. Waiting for the next
background story of Thalia & Claudia is getting unnecessarily long.. ?
First, ignore the cover image of the light novel; it gives a completely wrong impression of the story’s characters. Spoiler:
Like what the hell is Fran wearing?! She only owns and wears armor in the story.
Second, read the first 20 chapters (they are short, so it’s no problem) before commenting or deciding how the story is. Not everything has to start with a meteor shower, Truck-san, or a pair of boobs. Spoiler:
No ecchi for you here, only gap moe.
Maybe 11 chapters of a sword explaining the abilities and showing the mind, weaknesses of the main character (MC) could help with world-building.
I liked it enough that it became the first web novel where I read the raws until the latest release and now have started to translate it together with Ensign.
Bad points first:
- The MC sometimes rambles. Spoiler:
(well, he only talks to like 3 people in 180 characters, so of course he talks to himself)
- Short chapters? At least this means it will be released more frequently.
- Has only the most necessary world-building.
- Very few point-of-view (POV) chapters (I really like this kind of chapter).
Good points:
- Good pace.
- MC is a sword, so NO HAREM.
- No MC solving everything alone. Spoiler:
or even cares to.
- No moral preachiness.
- Fran.
- Fran's dialogues.
- Fran's grandiose speeches.
Fell off harder than humpty dumpty
Thanks for your recommendations. I tried out primal hunter and so far I'm enjoying it.
So is the new one better then?