MysticMosaicFsU
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
A Bit spelling mistakes but it's ok. Story now is taking hype and plz continue to write 4 chaps per week..A Bit spelling mistakes but it's ok. Story now is taking hype and plz continue to write 4 chaps per week..A Bit spelling mistakes but it's ok. Story now is taking hype and plz continue to write 4 chaps per week..
It's a slow going sci-fi, more of the star trek genre than the super fast video gamey sci-fi's you see on webnovel. However, the writing quality is good, so, you can read it fast. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.
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I have decided to write my second review after having 63 chapters so far and I want to let you know a few things. One, this is my first novel so it's not a surprised for you to see so many flaws in it. Two, I never written a novel chapter format before but I have learned as I continue to write more. Now let's go to the pros and cons of this novel.ProsStability in update of course is great and the storyline is unique in it's own way as the protagonist does not "follow the book" rules.It has some comedies and light-heart moment in a serious situation. The MC may seem like a simp but he's not because he has no lover like many male out there. Therefore, it's hard to know how to act around a female considering his inexperience.Not much pros as this novel is just the beginning of me writing in an impulse.ConsLet's say the grammars and tense could really make the story a bit confusing but smart readers should understand my meaning. Of course, if you found some wrong use of tense, do let me know so I can fix it and not look like a fool.The POV aka point of view does changes multiple time through out the novel but as I'm writing this review now. I have fully decided to get rid of the first POV to third POV as it's easier and gives me a wider range in story telling.The fight scene are not that great given I don't specialize nor have experience in how to portray one. But I will try my best to improve it and please be lenient for once.Overall, I didn't rate myself highly since most of the category is either a 3 star or 4star except for my stability of updates. I just hope you will give me a chance as a new writer in here.Thank you for reading my really long review. (However, a review should be this long to begin with xD)
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i dont care what novels you read and be inspired as long as you go to your own path than copying others its all good . lookinh forward to this novel. dont mind criticism it hones you to be better writer.
This story had a slow start and a small world view, gradually becoming more action-filled and increasingly getting bigger in scope. Kudos to the writer and translator for this exciting story.
Lots of standard cliches, however the book is still very engaging and fun to read. I 100% recommend this book to anyone that has a love for magic.
I like it so far.
everything is great the writing the release rates...the only problem....is the story and mc(complete and utter coward. even system calls him one). Unfortunately i cant see this ever becoming popular.rated 3.4* Ty for writing this and if u enjoy writing this keep going =)
Great book to read! I really like Gourmet of Another world type stories and from the summary I thought that the mc would be feeding literal ghosts on the side, ya know, like a supernatural horror cooking thing in modern times.
