So good. The tension, the light-hearted moments blend in well together.The story is very compelling and refreshingly new. The plot progresses at a good pace and the tension is great, hooking you in for the next chapter. It doesn't beat around the bush or rely on infodumps, it doesn't insult your intelligence nor try your patience. In short: a very well written novel.
The idea is very interesting. Good luck to continue the story.
so far so good ...I'm eagerly waiting for the next update
i have read up to 20 chapters so far so good
Pretty good grammar for an unknown book, but the mc is quite stupid. He says he wants world domination, but he enrolls in an academy? Personally, I stopped reading there. He also gives the mc a human and devil body which he can switch between whenever he wants. Idk kinda seems like plot armor.
Cool story I like it u guys should definitely read it is worth your time so enjoy and I love the font style the story just everything overall
Let me start off saying that this is a story written very well. The author is on point with his structure and grammar.That being said this is not a story for me personally. I find the MC a bit one dimensional. He is a bit boring. Here a few pros and cons based off what I have read already:Pros:-Great writing style-Good background information-Story moves along at a good pace-Main character starts of very wealthy and innately strongCons:-Main character is boring-Main character starts of very wealthy and innately strong (my opinion)As you can probably tell I'm dropping this because the story doesn't hook my attention. These rating are my opinion and may not reflect what others/majority fell.I do encourage you to read the first few chapters or even just the first chapter to suss out your own opinions on the story. Thank you and may you enjoy your stories.
A+_____________________________________________________________________________like_____________________________________________________________________________________________________98/100____________________________________________________
I love the book. I started reading it in light reader and it was several chapters ahead the app stopped functioning.I love how the story unfolds. It leaves me wanting more of it.I love that it has a good flow and the grammar is okay.Just update it faster.
Me likey. Seems like an easy going book but fun whist I like and seems like the mc is op in money sens. hope there isnt faceslapping and Hope for more chapters
Hi ,This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyShirley
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.