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I say we give this a try as its sort of new, I guess?----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Lovely webnovel, lots of references that are explained and described in ways that overtly yet also elegantly fit the world.My biggest grip, like every other person, is the Hiatus and possible droppage by the translator, especially considering I accidentally dropped this novel Years back at chapter 710 and forgot I had read to this point so seing the 718 chapters exited me until I hot to chapter 700, read the part I had read before and then checked and realised it hasn't been updated in nearly 2 years.The best part will always be the world building for me and not just including the various references but also tbe interaction with the system interface, npc interactions and the separate servers having their own advantages and disadvantages and would get smoothened after getting access to the Specialties of other servers.But nothing really offsets the hatred I feel, at the world in general not the author, that its been nearly 2 years without a word
character is to stupid, and the early life gets rushed through with the writer spending more time trying to justify his stupidity than be writing a believable character
I loved the system and amusement park setting. I hope more is coming out.
Read a few chapters but was unable to continue. The grammar is atrocious. Sometimes the author completely forgets that "a" and "the" exists in the dictionary. Has a high rating but sadly I'll have to drop because my eyes
I Do Feel That This Novel Should Have A R18 Tag And R18 Content To Complement It
Why does the story feels like it change after chapter 109 . Like a whole new world . Did I miss something or?
The translation is filled with many small errors.The story kind of stagnates after a certain point and is generally rather sporadic in how it structures its storytelling. The characters aren't exactly anything special.The world hasn't really been built upon in detail with anything new or interesting since the revelation that monsters and Taoists exist.This novel so far is overall alright, its just that at this point i'm only continuing to read because i like the premise and idea of a mysterious shop that makes transactions. The premise is interesting but it can only carry it so far and i hope that something new revitalises the story soon. It's worth a read imo and if the premise can capture you then you will enjoy your time.
I usually don't read romance as long as the main character isn't a female one, but I believe this novel is worth your time if you're looking for something and your plan to read list is already empty.I really feel conflicted when reading this novel. There is a big harem tag but I didn't expect the harem to turn this way. The plot is interesting, the characters too and sometimes you want to kill the main character because he's too full of himself.However when you start, you cannot keep reading. You want to know what happens to each of the characters, you want to know if it will end well for them.As usual expect the stereotypes from a mainland China writer, which translates into the novel...
Can't expect too much fight scenes in this because the MC...is weak. Early interactions with his sister is heartwarming, that's all that is good as of ch30. He has no clear goals right now and so it has become boring (for me). The plot: MC just interacts with sister and friend, trains despite having no improvements, showing off some unique abilities to shock them...the fights aren't exciting at all.The cheat: he gained a system which can possibly upgrade his skills to the max level. The cheat in not practical in the current stage because the mc is weak and poor.
Good concept and good novel .............................................................. ................................................................................ ..........................................
