muito bom. trama desenvolve muito bem e prende a atendo leitor
Great read you can tell the world is planned and not last-minute additions. The update once a day it looks like. At first, I thought it would be a cheesy system harem. But it definitely stands out and is not one.
The story is very good, I will be waiting.?????Thank you for the work you do creating this story..#####!!!!!!!!!....................................
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You are saying no harem or NTR but the cover of the webnovel says otherwise change the cover I know you did it so horny teens read your webnovel
Your book has great description and excellent verbiage. However, it lacks substance. Each chapter has so much exposition casually explained that it feels forced.Ch2 is Silas talking, demonstrating his magic to no one.Ch3 is talking, establishing Silas' overcautious nature and Saya being forward.Ch4 +2 characters, more talking.Ch5 is talking and more magic exposition.Almost nothing substantial happens, Author.Compare this to the prologue. Terrified scientist goes teleports 8 bodies away. Baddie shows up, taunts him and beats him. There is suspense, strong emotion, and extreme actions of a desperate spellcasting and a villainess beating a defenseless person.I advise you hold off on providing so much exposition, so many characters. Give us 1 or 2 and provide an active conflict where you can demonstrate their abilities, their personalities, their goals and motivations.As a reader, I'd prefer to discover exposition than be told. Instead of 'all the humans are dead' I'd rather hear Huxley's tortured screams, full of rage and despair, cursing Leviathan for her and her people's cruel genocide. The characters' abilities could be revealed in action scenes instead of briefly explained.World events can be conveyed through character conversation, like you did with the ferals. Also, Silas has no personality except that he's distrustful and hides from girls.Thanks for writing. I hope my relatively harsh review won't dissuade you from continuing as a writer. You have some very cool, I daresay "novel" concepts that have a lot of potential. I look forward to your growth. Let's work hard together, Author.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you and this book is so ???????????????????????????????????????????????????
I've enjoyed the very few chapters I've read so far. The writer has done a great job on this.I've enjoyed the very few chapters I've read so far. The writer has done a great job on this. This story reminds me of a movie name 'Benjamin button' but this right here is so detail and completely different from the movie apart from the ageing backwards bit. I like this world you've created and I sincerely love this book.
I don't know what to say,....Become the strongest musician, my godIts a novel.. A novel..Am I going to expect that the author will type a lot of lyrics here? Or doremi or notes if its high pitch or low? I'm thinking of "the voice"(without voice) novel version -_-
To be completely honest the Grammer and writing style is not very good. His sentences are very simplistic and he constantly switches between first person (I) and third person (He). This kind of sentence structure leads to a disjointed and jarring reading experience, making it hard to become immersed in the story he's trying to convey. That being said, at least the author seems to understand this as he tell us that English is not his native language in his synopsis. However, telling this to us up front doesn't make his novel any easier to read.Outside of the writing itself the main character is not very endearing and he constantly does stupid stuff that will make you angry. I can understand to an extent but he makes several large and avoidable mistakes that leaves me wondering if he even has a brain. In every other aspect hes kinda average without anything making him deep or complex. The same could be said about the plot and setting. It's not great but sometimes stuff happens out of freaking no where, leaving you frustrated. I do enjoy the gaming/leveling aspect of it though. I really like novels with these elements so it appeals to me more so than it might to others.Read this novel only if you can put up with the disjointed writing style, the dumba** mc, and if you don't have anything else to read. It would be a 3, or possiblly even 3.5 out of 5 stars had his English been better or the mc not being so stupid.
Nice novel.. witty..Interesting..Has potential for improvements though; but overall it's a fun ride.. Needs more chapters..Is it being updated in any platform...?
Wow not bad at all, I would love to see this one get some more attention with consistent updates but well you can’t win them all. Good plot, characters are interesting and things seem to be progressing well. I feel like it had great potential.