Very good book, writting is excellent. This book is very good at kingdom-building. It didn't feel that good at first, it felt like some cultivation world setting at first,but after 15 or so chapters it gets very interesting. I couldn't stop reading. every chapter is consistent. And, there is little info dump- saying that the data is integrated into plot is the no ways incorrect.
I hope to see more chapters soon...Really good so far. strong FL
The same system. The same protagonist. The same audience reacting to everything. The same people coming for help (obviously attractive women). Reading this is no different from re-reading the same book twice. There's not much difference at all. Quality declines and declines...where will it end?
I think this is a good book but I'm dropping it since it takes so long to update............................................................................................................................ .......
Absolutely loving this novel it's quickly becoming one of my favorites. Your writing is great and even though some people might not like the "slow" pace I'm loving it. I agree with another reviewer that there being few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC is a good thing for now considering it's the academy arc and the MC has no reason to care about other non-canon students (except possibly his future teammates).However I am interested in seeing dialog in the future between the MC and his future teammates. It may open up new ways to expand on the MC as he is almost too perfect personality wise. I'm wondering if he'll have any flaws? Will he always get along with everyone? Does he work well in a team? Can he get others to listen or will he listen to others? For now it makes sense because he's basically an adult and has no reason to pick fights with children about strength but will he ever lose his cool?Whether he stays this Kakashi-esk personality with the work ethic of Guy or we see a new side I look forward to it either way. Thank you for the chapters!
The novel has good Grammar and only minor mistakes. The idea for it is very unique and interesting. I was instanly hooked and cant wait for more to be released.
MC is incredibly dense and the system seems to have disappeared.he looks down on the cultivators then gets scared by every old man he meets thinking they are an expert
I like reading on pet beasts and cheatcodes!! ? So hoping this book to be picked ?????????????????????????????
Starting review I give to storys I beilve are prosomings aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
PLEASE CONTINUE! Please please please please I'm still hoping and waiting for the uploads... <3 This ero novel is pretty good... the story is pretty good ... yes, the anticipation of what will he/they do and happened next is actually pretty high... this is actually the best and can actually be the best ero novel i'll ever read so i really hope it continues
won't lie the power system in this novel is trash at times you have some of the skills at extreme and then perfection and couple chapters later you say the mc is not at that point yet and the cultivation levels need work I'm confused with it the story it self has potential but it has a lot holding it back.
Now THIS is a great story. I feel like the tense is a little... off putting however. “He walks away” “he walked away”. the second sounds better right? I feel like this story is an amazing plot, The characters feel so real, The world design is great. however i feel like it would have worked better in past tense format. but who knows, This is just my opinion. very good :)