Jettnash0
Friends, this is a GREAT little story. The Protagonist, Zhou Ji—Wonder if he's kin to Demoness Ji?—can edit Martial Skills or Cultivation Techniques. I'm not sure perfectly how that works, since he isn't free to take, "I'm a Bum" cultivating technique and directly raise it to "A Cultivation God Before Midnight—As Long as You Start Before 4:30 PM" cultivating technique. He is a BIT overpowered, but not quite to the "Multiply everything by10 000x" stage of ridiculousness…I really like his daughter and her Little Bitty White Dog. I HOPE this one gets picked—and I HOPE that I ain't jinxing it, cause lots of my favorites don't not get like picked.
this book is very good and very easy to understand, interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow, can't wait to continue reading this book
I am looking forward to this one and can't wait to see what happens. I love this kind of story and it make the go by with out me knowing while reading
I really enjoy what ive read so far Its s different version of let me game in peace I really hope this gets picked Cant wait to see where this goes
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Read everything so far, due to that cover... Cough CoughAnyway, it's quite the good read, and quite interesting as well. Story is super B, and im already loving that loli vampire just after chapter 1. Author has a good imagination, and is able to tell a very good to read story.HOWEVERthere's the problem of grammar, which often appears in conversations, in which the author isnt able to properply indicate if the MC or someone else is talking, or him thinking. grammar usually gets messed up when author tries to explain a conversation that is ongoing, especially in the first chapter. it rarely appears on the later chapters though, and mostly in the longer chapters.Im assuming the author is just tired from writing kekekeanyway, other that that, I really love the story this novel tells. All I need is more uploads! And please fix chapters one, or you might lose potential readers author sama!To anyone about to read this novel, read it! its really good, and only need some fixing in the long chapters. grammar, punctuations, and indications
i really love this novel. the exiled reble thing has deleted their work for reasons so this is a good way to read it! i dont really care that it was copy and pasted! i really love reading the extras!
VERY dumb (and naive) protagonist. I'm sick of the moments when he survives by fluke. the world is interesting, but it always seemed to me that the main character simply did not deserve the system
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It's very good...Hope it gets picked.....................❤️???❤️........................................................................❤️
This was nice, but I do have a couple complaints. First of all, I'm a bit lost on what his cheat actually does. He gets a bunch of cool stuff at the beginning thanks to it, but then never uses it again.Second, he's kinda dumb. I mean, he sends ALL of his SS rank units out. He has thousands, but he couldn't spare a couple to keep his workers from being injured? He almost permanently lost the unit type because he sent ALL of them into a dangerous area and only one survived.Plus there's this whole plot with a female character bribing her way onto his friends list, which never goes anywhere - we never hear from her again. Did the author just forget about her?
Well, I'm here form the other story and I like it so far. The MC aurora is a fresh start and doesn't seen as optimistic as the other one so that's already a huge plus for me. Also, the side characters are interesting and it's nice to see The MC not go for her primary love interest the first chance she got and actually sit back ans explore her options.
