Jettnash0
mhmmm
This story is great. The character is cruel and only thinks about himself, he isn’t your average MC.
I also like how it’s unpredictable, the author keep surprising me with just how many depravites could be in one story.
It isn’t for just anybody, know that before starting.
It also has a few plotholes, but nothing major. like how he didn’t get arrested early on in the story.
I gotta say, I got this story on my daily reco and I'm glad that I took the plunge to read it. It's quite a fun lighthearted read. I ended up reading up to the privileged chapters (chapter 43)
The MC is a fun character. To me, she comes off almost borderline psychotic with the way she talks to her pet owl and system out loud, thereby having random people looking at her weirdly. She's got a very nonchalant attitude, but that also doesn't stop her from giving the same energy back whenever people try her.
I like the way the author didn't do the typical "oh I gotta get away from the MC and co. to be an extra!!!"...while doing things that get the MC and their crew's attention. MC here legit goes out of her way to stay with the MC here because she knows she needs to help them, especially seeing how things are changing.
I think the story is a bit too early to judge the other characters as atm they need fleshing out, but I trust that the author will get into that once we get more chapters and the more she interacts with the world.
Right now as the story is still a bit early, we're only getting snippets here and there of the actual world, but from what we've seen so far it seems promising.
While there are some tropes that are reminiscent of other novels of a similar genre, (TNE as one example) I think the author did a good job of putting their own twist into it that kept me engaged.
There are a couple of minor grammatical errors and typos, but nothing that would throw you off of your immersion to the story.
Now the big thing. The author put paid chapters starting from chapter 20 and while I personally think that it's too early, I hope you readers continue with it anyway. I found it's worth spending my coins on the story as I've found it to be an enjoyable read so far.
it is too fast paced, but that's fine I guess
Great writing quality, just needs a bit more work on the world background. But still, very nice updating stability but go to sleep for once. By the way, perhaps you'll need a proof-reader~
The AI seriously take over the jobs from mankind. That sad reality, but well, that what happen when capitalist cane for industrial revolution back then.... It about stepping forwart. Nice blurb, will read it for sure!
pretty good story so far. great detailing on characters and background. it's steady pace reading. not like other novels that are roller-coaster or stop and go.
Starts off well, normal OP mc, but after the 40th chapter the quality of the translation changes.I've noticed this in several other novels.does anyone know why they do this??
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I like this story, variety content. I'm excited to read the next chapter.Included romance, thrilling, suspence....... and this all categories are my favourite. ???
Cover page is attractive. Concept or theme is really unique. Writing quality is nice as well. Plot seems hooking. So ,5 stars. I would recommend author to add a few figure of speechs and it'll add more colours in the piece. Super work author.
