What can I say but WOW!!! Great story and character development . You are drawn in from the beginning and there is never a dull moment. Highly recommended be prepared to not sleep till you are done.
While it is an okay story this book just has too many things wrong with it to be amazing. First is that this book does not do any explaining of the setting or give the characters backgrounds. While I know this is a common thing on this site but there are just a lot of grammar mistakes in it too. The story just progresses too fast it doesn't stay on a topic it just goes through story lines extremely fast. Would not recommend.
This a good novel I don't care what everyone think, everyone makes mistake maybe the autor does make grammar mistake, my opinion is that this is a great novel
Please... Onegaiii improve ur grammar and how u construct ur sentences. I came here to enjoy and I did but I am also stressed over the fact that I have to decipher the meaning of ur sentences to understand what is going on. I came here to have a good time not deciphering obscure language... Uhhhh it ticks me so much. I sadly have to drop this until I can finally understand a single sentence without tiring my brain out. Peace ✌.
WoW read it all the way tru for chapter 1 to 60 , good stor.GEt a Little better on the latter chapter sBbbbbbbbb bbbbbbbbbwedddddddv,
I don't read cultivation, this is not my genre, but I have a major crush on Shen Tian okay? Just wanted to start off by saying that. The first chapter really gets you needing an explanation, and won't let you put the novel down. Full marks for the hook! Writing quality: 4/5 There's clarity and structure, but slight work required on tenses. This is always a problem with people, including myself, but it's really minute in this case. I really enjoyed the flow! Stability of updates: 5/5Don't know about it, but this author needs to give us MORE! <3 Story development: 5/5Author doesn't give anything away in the beginning. It's interesting to peel each layer away. The events have me wondering about the motives of the MC and other characters. A lot of different elements introduced right at the beginning, but it's making me interested rather than confused which is the crux to a brilliant story.Wold background: 4/5Pretty vivid! I felt like an observer from the get go. It's a thrilling experience to go through. I want to keep reading ahead to get a better picture. ^_^
Good work keep it up.....one problem tho i just dont want bitches like sofia to just u know order the mc he is like what can i do and all....because then he is more like a beta mc which i personally dont like....i read the latest chapter as of yet and i hope mc treats sofia the same she did to him.THATS ALL AND STORY IS QUITE GOOD.
This is a Burn. The tags and synopsis indicate this is a serious novel. This is NOT a serious novel. It does not belong in the Magical Realism category. Fulfilling the Magical Realism category would require the Author have some memory and care for what he wrote before. Magical Realism is like Sci-Fi. You are supposed to use and follow a set of rules and keep your plot organized and cohesive. If the tags were Spoof, Clueless MC and Comedy, then the right people would have read the novel instead of all of us looking for a serious and plot driven power novel based on the current synopsis and tags.
I have no clue why this novel quit releasing but it is a classic that i wish could finish out because this book is a great read with good character building and story telling!
Well, let’s just say that this novel of both unorthodox and unique. Read a significant number of chapters before writing this review and I’ve come to the conclusion that this simply isn’t my cup of tea. MC is definitely an oddball as compared to the many others I’ve seen, but it’s almost to an exaggerated extent in my opinion. Though I guess this is what one would expect from a parody novel. Not much to really criticize, it’s a good light hearted read I suppose.
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well thought out and great writing, but for the editor who looks to be pushing there agenda at the cost of this writers story. if love to see them write it too a end if they get a editor to fix when the last one destroyed .