Pros- Good plot Likeable characters Good game mechanics Regular updates Bing watch worthyCons- grammar in some chapters Some transitionEither way I am enjoying it very much all the best writer
I love the story so far I just hope the mc doesnt start going soft now that he has a daughter and tries to please everyone instead of just killing I also hope he continues to slaughter his way to the apex :D
One of my early favorites in my library. This story has a great world view, a testament to the author's prolific imagination. The various worlds were described in substantial detail while the increase in the main character's strength and those of his cohorts was brought about gradually but in an even pace that will not bore. Some parts may be too gory and not suited for those with weak stomachs but it is what it is. I just wish that new chapters can be added at a faster pace.
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amazing plot at first and it gradually gets even better each chapter. its definitely easy to read and captivating which make the readers succumb to the story. nontheless, the story is approachable to all kind of ppl who seeking a good book to read! All the characters are interesting and lovable! overall recommend it to readers out there!
Literally kumo desuga nanika or im a spider so what copy with bad translation and if it was chinese instead of japanese .
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I read this on scribblehub and it's definitely one of my favorite stories currently. The writing flows smoothly, the story development is very interesting and character design is great! I especially love the father-son interactions. I'm just hoping that the updates will be more frequent.
Trash absolutely trash Don't even waste your time reading this and save your brain cells..................................................
quite an interesting novel... tbh it has everything you need for a novel about reincarnated as the IJN Yamato in azur lane but more... like there's actually more than enough for this to be an actual anime
it's pretty good so far it's filled with interesting characters, the main professors that help our protagonist in particular are some of my favorites. Only complaint is the time skips can be jarring I wished they were implemented more naturally instead of jumping straight into the new segment with no acknowledgement. Anyway I hope you keep going strong I need to see our mc rise to the top and get some waifus in the way?
The Story has potential, but the Characters and poorly written, alongside the World Background. Updates are decent and the Writing Quality is the ugh. I'm not good with Grammar myself but your story is full of writing mistakes and jumbled words like for example "I went the to shop" I noticed that a lot where you have 2 words mixed together.Final Review: 3.2 Star