Yet… The current Divine Lord was someone qualified to fight for the title of the Supreme Emperor of the entire Dimension made out of trillions of realms.
Writing Quality: 5I’m not an native nor have I spoken English for a extremely long time so I can’t really judge a novel on it’s grammar and stuff. Didn’t notice any problems though so 5/5Stability of Updating: 4Well, I don’t have much to say about this. 7+ch/week like promised. Did have a minor issue a while ago but Author promised us it won’t happen again. So that’s why it’s a 4 instead of a 54/5Story Development: 5The speed is neither too slow or too fast. Spending just enough time in the targets’ world to not see it as a passing side story and really get connected with all the characters in that world, but also not too slow to the point where it get repetitive and boring. It hit the sweet spot right in between.Character Design: 5All the characters are well thought out. They aren’t just flat characters which can be described in one sentence, but feel more like normal humans with complex thoughts. **Personal opinion**(more like me just being a fan girl (but I’m a man so should it be fan man? Nahh doesn’t sound right. Fan boy that’s it))I really really reaaaaallyy love how the grandmother that took care of the MC was written. I actually felt tears welling up in my eyes. 5/5(+infinite for grandma)World Background: 5The world was well thought out, and so was the system. Don’t really have lots to say about World Background because I don’t know how to judge a story where the MC is constantly traveling to other worlds. Decided I couldn’t really penalize the overall score because of my inability to give a proper review, so yeah. 5/5Overall: 4.8Really happy I found this novel again. Really really happy. I mean it. Promise.
"There was no need." Ying said with a tiny and gentle smile.
Masato looked up at Captain Shizo. The entirety of Team 3 was sticking to the bridge's walls by their stomach.
352 chapters, completed in raws, the last chapter was just an outline, very abrupt ending. it was good until it ended.
its so sad to lose her wolf just after meeeting her
From how unique the story is to how smooth it flows to how its written like someone who speaks actual english????10/10
Author I gotta give you a thumbs up. I'm not a fan of the video game genre but once I read your first chap you had me hooked. --------------------------
Lovely System wish everyone had a System once when you reincarnate
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great synopsis must be followed by captivating story. Honestly I just read the first chapter after reading the synopsis, I not completely sure yet but it held great potential I hope the other chapters won't drag this evaluation down.
Chapter 20 Review:So 20 chapters in and not only is the MC supposed to be frugal with his magic use but apparently the author has also decided to be frugal about focusing on this aspect as well which was the whole draw of me wanting to read this story.Instead there's a jarringly quick love interest that gets sickeningly saccharine and stays that way so far. And of course this is set within the overwhelmingly generic school setting with the requisite dumb antagonists who don't approve of him getting the girl. All of that is a major eyeroll but my real issue is with the lack of focusing on the magic system and especially on how/why the MC is a "frugal mage". At this point, unlike the couple's supercharged interest for each other, my own interest in this story has become limp and flaccid.