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I enjoyed reading the story thus far. Everything, was written exceptionally well for the most part. Although, he/she got their possessive adjectives mixed up sometimes. Besides that, I don't have that many complaints when it comes to the story. Unfortunately, I can't continue supporting this book. The author has a tendency to be demeaning to his readers. If you don't believe me. Read his responses to me and others. His behavior is that of a child. I can't support someone like this. Good luck to him/her.
Haven‘t even read this but as an Overwatch Fan the Title is a must read for me(crusaders and stuff)
this is a hidden gem! i like the story, the character development, the world background, and the story is not rush which is i liked the most! i loved you novel author-san<3 i hope this novel continue until i grow old hehe
Misleading title and synopsis in my opinion.Mc is not a real Young Master because he doesn’t act like one after a few chapters he is your normal mc that struggle and fight to get stronger and even his young master act has a sob story behind it. I thought this would have a arrogant mc that has backing and comedy but it’s normal survival apocalypse story.
A very nice book with agile start up. The beginning got me to read down the interesting drain. The author, at first, was very realistic in narration, that's what I love most.
Disclaimer- review made at chapter 200Pretty good so far. Doesn't excel at anything in particular, but very solid in every aspect.writing quality: 4*Good. I mean, there's not much more to say. No glaring issues, decent VSPaG. Not mind-blowing enough for 5 stars, but more than enough for a Webnovel.Story development: 4*Excellent so far. Relatively slow paced, but always interesting and has an overarching plot that is starting to come into play now.Character design: 4*This is a weird one. Sometimes the characters are weird and behave slightly awkwardly compared to previously, while other times I (mentally) squeal in delight due to a surprising but great decision to add a new dimension to a character or give them a closure that they need in a story like this. Overall though, the reason the book scores well despite its inconsistencies is the linking of characters we met previously with new plot points, which works superbly. The obvious example is the MC discovering his new body's past, but other examples include the village leader and the dungeon, as well as one of the MC's quests with the first person he meets after his "reincarnation".updating stability: 5*Honestly just great. I give big props to anyone that can consistently release a chapter a day every day of the week, and doubling that just impresses me further.World background: 4*This is 4* due to the story still being in its nascent stages. What we have seen so far is pretty standard, but interesting nonetheless. We have the growing village, the nearby biomes and other villages leading to a few larger towns, and then a capital city further away with currently unknown expanses on the way. Politically, we know of the crown and the larger families plus a small insight into some of their allies and enemies. At the moment, the monsters are quite underdeveloped background-wise, to the point some readers questioned the morality of killing them, but I at least trust the author has a plan in this aspect.Overall, great read, and I recommend it so far if this genre is your sort of thing. I will try to answer any questions people may have if I see them, and sorry if my review seems too surface-level; in actuality I'm mainly doing this to get to 10 reviews for level for of the comment badge.
So, before I start reviewing this novel and explaining as to why I am giving it 5 stars, I want to say that Author should change the name of this novel to Revival of Eastern Roman Empire/Roman Empire, using the name some idiot thought to be romantic shouldn't be allowed.now, with ranting out of the way, let's move on to the review itself.Writing Quality - it isn't superb per-say, but, it only has few occasional mistakes and as such deserves at least 4.5 stars.Stability of Updates - 5 stars, because looking at it, it doesn't seem like he missed a day without a reason(such as being in the army, duh)Story Development - one of the things I really love in this novel is that it doesn't jump you straight into the action, it introduces characters left and right without making you feel tired and overwhelmed with all the Greek or Turkish names. fight scenes aren't forced and they are quite nicely introduced into the play. as such story development of this novel gets 5 stars.Character Design - now, this is the major thing that you should love in this novel if you love history... and that is characters... almost every character in this novel is someone you can google and learn more about. the only mistake I have seen so far in 90 chapters is Vladislav II Dracula, and it isn't that big of a mistake, just delete 'Dracula' in that name and everything is fine. Main Character is a likeable character and Side characters are actually important and 'alive', with their distinct personalities.World background - now this one is tough to rate because there are some amazing details that Author has implemented in his story, but there are some absurd things as well... like there being smoking pipes in the 15th century... as such I am giving the world background solid 4.8(there are other mistakes as well apart from smoking pipes, that's why it gets 4.8)Finally, the novel itself according to these criteriums gets... 4.825 Stars :P but Webnovel says it's 4.8... (don't trust it)
If you can compare it to other novels, it is like the korean novel Running away from the hero that combines with a system.. It has a bit of a different feel, but has the same plot of a funny instructor villain.. You are an instructor who trains villains and some disciple become a villain or a hero who loves you or wants to take your life like a tsundere or yandere... hahaha.. give it a try..
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I am honestly not a fan of sci Fi but this novel changes my mind. The world building is excellent and the vocabulary used is written in a good style that flows. I have to say that I am enjoying this novel thus far and i am going to continue reading further. Best of luck to you!