Daoist99taoistKtq
this book is great.
Great job Bella, enjoyed the novel
loved it so much! a must read
Great book held my interest from start to finish great work author will be looking for more from you!!!
Nice book…which days do you update the book?
bagus rangga
Awesome! Great story! For your First book, You would never know. I am officially one of your fans! Great story and I legit shouted out loud at you big reveal, you had me at the edge of my seat reading this and I can't for more! I enjoy reading from multiple POV Especially the Male POV like Grayson
Lovely bea
Does all the yandres like only a fking dense mc ?
Up to chapter 52. This is good, but it's written in an obnoxious way. Author is wordy, they'll go on for a long paragraph or more in narration about a barrier. There will be maybe 3 facts in it, but it'll be 10 sentences at least. Then the characters will just say the narration again in different words, nothing new. They'll have long conversations where they just dance around the main point. Then it won't even say the main point! It will say, "and they came to a decision." Okay, what decision?? Wasn't the point of us reading that conversation entirely to find out the decision? Nope. The author often writes the boring parts of the story and literally SKIPS over the important parts, just briefly summarizing them a chapter or two after they happen. It's mind boggling, like reading LOTR if it just depicted Frodo avoiding questions while packing his suitcase instead of the actual journey. It can't be about mental health. There's 0 psychology, the characters have no real personalities.
I just realised
This novel is just a reversed version of cultivation tropes
Where everyone beside MC are dumb arrogant brainless idiots who jump on any opportunity without thinking twice
Here Everyone is just too smart for their own good and apply regular mental gymnastics to judge each f*ck*ng situation way cautiously and doubt their existence at every point...
Lol this made me laugh for some reason ? it’s probably the good kind aka shocked excitement xD
