Cultivation is non existent. Everyone wants to kill you on sight. The Detective’s intuition is so supernatural that the author doesn’t need evidence. The 2 girls are annoying.Honestly dont try to do more than what you can handle author. Stick with the power fantasy sect building and it would have been better than what this is.
I have somewhat mixed feelings about this novel. This novel had a great idea, and for the most part the plot was pretty good. However a few things didn't make much sense.So first off, the main character. He has lived in the void for trillions of years. It was stated his lost his sanity and regained his sanity multiple times. Putting aside the fact that humans trapped in a void for trillions of years would likely never regain their sanity, when he gets out of the void is where the problems start. When the main character eventually is reincarnated as a human, despite what was mentioned previously he still has quite a bit of emotions. He is not really a "cold calculating" as initially described, he is empathetic but kills to get to his goals. The problem with this, he has literally lived in the void for a indeterminate amount of eons, and has zero emotional defects? I'm at chapter 72, and he quite frankly has perfect sanity, with no emotional defects. Which, again, makes no sense. As for the side characters? We have antagonist #1 - 10, and useless girl who stays by the main character's side #1 and #2. He keeps a annoying energy parasite next to him for no good reason, despite it endangering him quite a bit. Also, as much as I love unforgiving worlds where the main character barely survives, this just isn't it. Literally everyone the main character meets trys to kill him at some point, it's kinda exhausting to read. I swear theres large swaths of people who will try and kill him just for the giggles. The plot in general kinda sucks. The main character wants to learn how to use mana more efficiently, so instead of taking the short way to go to the mages association to learn, he takes the long way. (He could've revealed he has a mana core to be taken there straight away, but instead he didn't and now has to walk 5000 miles across various places with next to 0% survival rate.) Why did he do this? Because it might give too much attention to him. Which I personally find laughable, considering how much attention he has gotten so far, I doubt revealing a mana core will change anything.Furthermore, the writing quality is sub-par, even for this site. Theres a lot of run-on sentences and a ridiculous amount of grammatical errors. Grammarly could've fixed the majority of mistakes. The conversations the main character has are kind of awkward, I can't really anyone actually saying this without being extremely cringy.Overall, a good idea, and it had a good plot outline, but failed the execution miserably. Writing quality, story development, and character design fall short. World background is only average.
The backstory of the character and his actions are completely different. And this is at the very beginning, I quit reading.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
First the main two things people dislike which is the writing quality and point of view shifts. The writing quality isn’t perfect but readable as it is mostly minor mistakes like lighting/ lightning getting switched up as an example. I usually auto correct it as I read so I don’t notice it much but just something to be aware of for those who care about that. The Pov switch in the beginning isn’t the best but it improves as it goes. The different point of views let us see what movements are happening in the world that relate to the mc or provide information whether it is about the world or characters. The way it is used especially later on with characters to flesh them out is great.The world is done well with a interesting background and how it works. The story is good keeping you interested on finding out more and seeing what actions the main character will take. To wrap it up it is a good read that is worth a try to see if you like it and I hope it gets updated plenty in the future as it is getting good.
I believe some more work can be done on character description. There are indeed some Grammer errors. Development of the plot and chapter to can get better. I have faith you have the potential to upgrade on this point
like seriously ?first of all, What wowed me wa a the setting, then characters... wow this is one of the best action thriller novel I have read so far. I don't know about you guys but I'm dead serious..... it's really intriguing
Love with all of those legend and mythology connected and build the world. The theme is dark, the MC is a villain who is willing to do almost anything to accomplish his goals and not even flinch hurting a WOMAN!
If you want to read this novel these are the things that you should be aware.Misspelling ~ It would have been ok if there were only a few misspelled words but there to many that you would have to reread the sentence to understand it.Grammar ~ Along with misspelled words are sentence that is hard to understand because the grammar is messed up.Fighting Scene ~ Just skip the fight scene. It's like a 3 yrs old kid playing fights with his toys.Story ~ Just give up!And my most hated thing about this novel is:It's Premium ~ I don't know what made the author thinks that this will is worth the premium but for me it's a waste of "Fast Pass". Don't bother spending your FP, if you want to read this novel just wait until it's unlock. It's not worth it!**: this my opinion and Review!!
It was a decent one for a couple of hundred chapters. One would have expected a weird sect like that of MC where all his disciples are his lovers without exception given the title, but what was really weird is that he did not have a single lover before becoming an immortal and now he almost behaves as a *** maniac. Ignoring all this, the story was a light and enjoyable read at the start.Then author starting writing another book and updates to this one became slow as a snail. So I skipped reading for a few months and came back to it. The latest chapters (200-240) have the first so-called "war" supposedly orchestrated by the MC. Long planning, execution running into nearly 40 chapters. The end result was that couple of (irrelevant) underlings of the main characters were killed, MC sneak attacked to kill a few of the competitors of his disciples who have been more-or-less engaged in a fair competition, and thousands/millions of bystander humans killed.I had thought that this whole scheme was to somehow kill the main perpetrators and beast traitors, but the above mentioned end result was perfectly in accordance with MC's plans. So MC managed to kill a couple of characters who are largely irrelevant, who were weaker than MC anyway and who could have been killed by some planned ambushes. Oh, and even the son of one of the main perpetrators was not killed because apparently it would bring a lot of trouble. So overall MC thought of this brilliant idea of orchestrating a huge war just to sneak attack these useless characters, killing thousands/millions of "ant mortals" in the process and even endangering his other body, wife and child. Go figure.
pog yandere ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Story about a weak, ignorant, coward MC that gets bullied. If that was not enough, he has a sick sister. No thanks. No idea why he has awful attributes nor cannot get an attack skill.
Check out this novel! I really loved it!:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)