Looks like this Naifa Lian’s chick might be the one to finally get my boi attention
Oh my god. I'm just starting the story and I am already embarrased for all of Feiran's clumsiness
Just want to know when did Qing Xuan became a woman. He's been introduced as a handsome brother at the end of chapter 72, but became a sister at chapter 205. I initially thought it's a mistranslation, but it's not the first time that's why I'm confused now.Also, it would be much better if the author can introduce the characters here in a clearer way especially for Yang Huai, a scholar that looks intelligent at first, but became idiot in the end and the level of shamelessness here almost seem unreal, if they are talking about the women at that year, then I would really think they are more preserve than the way they are described here, well maybe there really is someone like that idk.What I said isn't really a big problem, the story is really good, but it's just quite disturbing everytime I think about those things and it's not like I can do anything about that, so yeah nevermind.
Chapter 1390 : Mc is just pure evil what he did is absolutely insane
Alright, I read chapter 15, and it became borderline unbearable. First of all, the character interactions are dry and seem to be rushed. Second, the MC is unbearable and a complete simp, from the second he met Hilary (his real crush that just happens to conveniently be in the same area as him from the thousands that just randomly spawn in. Plus, his friend is trapped in the game too, but this rich girl who has never interacted with him before is more important). He shows her his secret abilities and grants her free power-ups for no reason besides him being an imbecile. And he has absolutely no sense of danger. He is not at all worried about being stuck in a world forever and just immediately gets over it.
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Rich and handsome vigilante. Not one but four male lead. I just hopes that all has equal exposure though i understand that the author was probably focusing on one lead character at a time. For now, I love Daxon and Amina's story. Daxon is not stupid as Matthew. hahaha. Althoufh Matthew was more vigilante than Daxon...I think. This story is a thumbs up for me. I am still reading and I cannot wait for more chapters.
Story OK. To be fair the author did say its his first novel and he isn't a native English speaker. And it shows. Badly. I've dropped it. I rarely drop books just because of writing quality but I couldn't continue.This was as bad as mtl. The bad ones. BUT if you can handle mtl or are not a native speaker then this isn't really a problem. As this was also the authors first work, other problems such as story pacing, character progression, character interaction and behaviour all needs work. Theres a lot of telling and very little showing. This comes with practice, time and experience.My advise to the author as simply a fan of light novels is to read more well written English novels. Not translated, but actual English novels. You'll pick up a lot and it'll help you construct your novels better in tbe future.For anyone who read all this and want an actual review.. Transmigration story where male MC gets into modern world with monsters. System makes him cultivate stronger. For once the original body isn't some begger or poor son which is actually refreshing. It's why I think this author with some work and experience can actually write a good novel in the future.
It legitimately is borderline peak web novel, with human characteristics, young masters have brains, MC grows and gets smarter at a proper rate and the weak to strong aspect is done perfectly. The plot/plot twists are great and the development is perfect.
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(Up to chapter 36 review) The character development is done well, not too fast and not too slow. The author has done well to make the story interesting with a brutally overpowered MC and as of now I see great potential with the story. The world building hasn’t fully got the chance to develop yet but there is huge potential. Overall I would give this a read.
I really like the story. the author can describe the story really well. but, i feel pity for Nico. keep spirit author .keep up the good work.