Great story and very interesting . I have nothing left to say so I will just keep doing this until I can post it because need 140 characters sorry.
In this author's latest novel, the author tries to work harder in terms of writing, character design, and storyline, even though the historical genre mixed with kingdoms is a new topic that the author explores but does not display the enthusiasm and hard work that the author tries to present in the novel. In short, please enjoy it and if you can be generous, please provide constructive criticism and input because it means a lot to the author.
Is this also a Yandere story'? i honestly want this to be one. I hope so, and if it's just harem, then it's fine also. I pray for the almighty Yandere Goddess to make this into one.
The writing is superb in verbosity and the concept is not unique but extremely interesting and well filled in. The main character develops well but unfortunately his development is a parabola. Without spoiling, it is suffice to say that he ends up steeped in issues he never initially finished conquering while forcing himself to stay in the atmosphere of a team setting that is clearly not conducive to his growth. The authors update stability antics speak for themself.
It's fun to read, id like to see mc have less frequently new woman but when he does it should be very special. But i like it as it is (give him dragon loli empress plz^^}
what a nice beginning I hope you can continue...............................................................................................
Funny story, keep it up, and be more creative.
You are good, please be yourself. Do not try to copying others. Its good to be inspired by other.
Oh, and do not make the readers pleased. Its your story, your world. Yours. Not other people.
Keep it up, i'm rooting for you.
Fan +1
You stopped updating or what?
lucky find E
TL;DR - great premise, ******* execution.I agree on "hidden gem" assessment with other reviewers. This novel definitely stands aside from many cookie cutter xianxia on this site.As for genre, I'd say it is a xianxia/mystery with a slight transmigration twist. Now, is the novel good? I am... rather conflicted. On one hand, I read all the 60 chapters available in one sitting and am even so impressed I am writing this review, so its definitely not trash. On the other hand I find myself not adding the novel to my library - after getting a solid taste of what is it like I am just not very exciting for the next chapter.Writing quality is average. It could be the author is just trying to imitate (poorly written and translated) xianxia novels, and this is causing his own prose to be generic and uninspiring. It definitely has that cultivation aftertaste - phrases like "boundless heavens
This i a good book,im looming forward on reading this.thank you..........................................................................