You really made an interesting plot. Although there are mispled words and some grammatical errors. But overall it was a nice story. I hope you continue writing bro.
This story is alright but it’s quite interesting for me. I would really like to see this get chosen although not as good as Game of life or apocalypse forecast it’s still a solid story compared to some of the other trial read books. Man am depressed that those two didn’t get picked but hey what can you do am I right? Anyway I hope those of you with coins could invest some here so it can be picked, it’s really a interesting concept.
I strongly recommend you read The Sword Deity in Tokyo or High School Life Of An Exorcist to get an idea of this novel.[img=coins]
The thing that perplexes me the most is why do the Authors feel the need in making the Japanese MC a Kuudere? At the most only 'Sword Deity' executed this well. This story and 'Life of Exorcist' failed in making a cold tsundere.
Failed in making a proper Shiba Tatsuya/Fruit De Grisaia. [img=fp]
On to the story now. I really like Romance, I don't get why people dislike her. I just dislike how MC a d*ck to her. I might read the Raws just to see how this goes. I want to believe this story improves.
There aren't a lot of chapters so it's hard to judge. I'll edit my review if I do read the raws.
Not much to say. If you are really curious about how the novel is, just look at the overall rating.
Anything below 4 on this site where ratings are blatantly manipulated should just go to show how bad the novel really is.
Also, 40 chapters Webnovel? Not surprised. Run by greedy pigs.
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I like me this book has good development so far. I just wish we had 40 chapter trial reads back. I’be been trying to find a new one to read for a while So hopefully this one makes it past the Vote.
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the story is great and very entertaining. it has a strong "Lord of the mysteries" vibe so if you are a fan, this book will be right in your alley. characters are well designed and not shallow. Plot is well thought and complex. The only con is the English which is not perfect, otherwise this would deserve a 5/5.
Its a really good read but I have one question and that is when are you going to post the next chapter because it's been 2 months and I really want to see how the story progresses
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average rating for average storyline. Why can't MC stay talented AND find the devouring whatever cheat thing. Ah whatever this story has no chance of being picked. Next.
Is there any harem or romance. If there is then this story won’t be for me
I will read and se if there’s any harem
And I hope it’s gore ....??.????.?.??