Jeinny23
I just couldn't get over from the first chapter. really awesome. it made me hooked up. amazing book
79 chapters 2/27/24
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I started liking the book, but the audacity of the ml, always grinning and having his way is upsetting to say the least. The way you also portrayed the fl as weak is so annoying.
Great work author. I'm really captivated by your writing. It's almost perfect and that's only because 'no one's perfect.' Love your writing Author!! ...
Wow. Reading again feels great.
Most addictive book I’ve ever read and I keep wanting more
I'm glad this book was recommended to me. I absolutely love it. More updates please
more grease to your elbow authoress
sorry couldn't get past the grammar problems.
I need to talk about Yan Wuhan. Like, he barely appears in these chapters but every time he does, it lands. Yan Wuxin's first priority after escaping the assassination isn't revenge or power—it's making sure her brother is okay. She brings him into a room, washes her hands, and leaves. The casualness of it is what makes it hurt. "I am no longer the Yan Wuxin I used to be. I won't provoke others if they don't provoke me. From now on, I will protect you." That line. That's not a villain origin story—that's a big sister who's done being underestimated. The way she says it to Yan Wuhan, calm and matter-of-fact, while still dripping with bloodlust from the maids she just killed? Chilling and beautiful at the same time. And then there's the weird tension with Xuanyuan Mei. I know, I know—he's a thousand-year-old demon lord who called her weak and old, weak, sick, and disabled. But there's something underneath that. He feels a "strange sense of familiarity" with her despite being sealed for tens of thousands of years. His parting warning—"stay away from men. Otherwise, I will kill"—reads less like a threat and more like... something else. Protective? Possessive? The author isn't spelling it out and I respect that. Xiao Li is the emotional relief valve. This ancient Kongjian spirit who immediately starts calling her "beautiful sister" and getting flustered? Adorable. Their dynamic has this weird found-family energy that I didn't expect to get invested in but here we are.
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