First of all, the idea of Anima is inspired by Gu from Reverend Insanity but I've put my own twist on it. Hopefully it's at least a little bit original and you like it.Outside of that, I think the book is quite unique, especially in terms of how the world is and what the main character is like. However, I won't say too much other than that the MC is pure evil.Best parts of the novel:Characters - The main characters all have depth and personality, but it's not just them. Every character has at least some thought behind them, even throwaway characters. That means you won't get scenes where side characters act stupidly for no reason.Quality of writing (I am English, I speak great English, don't expect spelling errors or anything)World building - I've put a lot of effort into creating the continents, thinking about what species live there, what environments there will be and all that good stuff. I'm especially proud of the more that will start to be revealed as the novel goes on.Bad bits:Dialogue - Some conversations may seem a little clunky or stiff. This is the main area of my writing that I'm trying to improve, so hopefully dialogue will become more natural and free-flowing as the novel progresses.Slow(ish) development - The novel isn't a slow starter at all, it begins with 3 high action trials and there are lots of fight scenes after that as well. What I mean is that characters and places will not be developed right away. I will take time with these things and you won't get huge lumps of backstory or information about people, places or things.Changes in writing style - I have written other things before, but this is my first full-length novel, so my writing style will change and develop as the novel progresses.P.S. I would really appreciate comments about which parts of the novel you enjoyed and which bits could be better. These kinds of comments will help me become a better writer, which will in turn make this a better novel. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the book!
The first chapter is good, and the book has an interesting plot that caught my eye almost immediately. I love how the writer portrays the characters.Kudos to the author!
I wanted to read the story but who would've known that the story just started and a "young master" came out of nowhere to kill the MC. This just ruined my mood and I stopped reading.
When you coming back man/woman? We still want to see where the story leads to and ends.
Great writing,great story writing,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???????. Great way of telling the love story loved the novel i strongly recommend this novel to everyone
Obligatory Author review. This one is a dream project of mine, as I have been long inspired by the anime "The Devil is a Part-timer". For the longest time, I have wanted to write something similar. This story is inspired by that anime with its own twist. Hope you find it interesting and support it in the future. Thanks!
after reading first demonic dragon,I had a lot of expectations for this novel and I'm glad i haven't been disappointed ?... Authorsama we need more chapters and regular release ???
I never wrote a review for these trial novels, but I am honestly very surprised Webnovel went as low as showing this trash in the trial read.Are they trying to rot our brains to death?Like, this is a bellow 2 book and yet they still put in the trial read and have the audacity to call it one of the best rising books?
I love everything about this book the characters the animals they're adorable everything
It's a great Novel and the character development is stable and explained And must read for all man of culture
For the first up chapters it is already very good. Hopefully this one gets choosen to continue.
Cannot give 5 star.Because i know author have a bad habit in delaying the chapter release.Not just this one but many author.Just keep it up an do your best.Dont drop it like the top star.My mood for reading a novel dropped so much.Because some of novel really2 bad to read. And some good novel dropped. Some of it become bad.Author just do your best