It is actually an interesting story, I like how it's going, the characters are interesting as well specifically the Mc. Hoping for more chapters
I hope you enjoy my book, looking forward to any feedbacks
cool, great storyline. I would like to see more
I like this story lol it can be popular if more people read it
Frankly, an empty and unnecessary series, the system in which the main character is unnecessarily forced is completely useless and humiliating, the main character's sucker completely ends this series, especially the fight between Ethan and Leon, it was completely nonsense, I don't understand why the author wrote such a ridiculous and forced script, no, what was his purpose, Leon was already much stronger than Ethan at the beginning, and when the day of the duel came, half of Ethan's abilities were sealed by the system and ruthlessly humiliated and beaten by Leon in front of everyone, so if the author saw it as a way to improve the character by forcing it, there were many other ways to improve his character.
My main problem with this story is the lack of descriptions. I have seen no mentions kn the features of the characters, other then they are pretty or have a good body. That is not descriptive enough. Instead of saying talk about their hair color, height, etc. I do like the idea of the story so far and its interesting. Great job so far, keep up the great work!
i loved chapter 4 :) this book seems so far like it will be fun to read
An excellent story! One of the best I've had the good fortune to stumble upon while randomly looking for something to read. The pacing is excellent, the character and world design is well thought out, the update speed is up there with the best, and other than some minor grammar and spelling errors the writing is solid. 10 out of 10, I'm about to read it again.
Even if I don't read the novel yet , I give all 5 for the author because he is a man of a cultural
alright, so I've just started reading and just from the beginning "bird eye" view of a few chaps, I can already tell it's a decent read. The narrative is clear and concise, and storytelling seems interesting enough to allow you to binge quite a few chaps in one sitting. Satisfactory.
"Okay-okay, now number 3 here, how many human toxid children are on this earth," I said.
after continuously winning, the casino will not let him come out so easily, and this truth. after all, this money is more important than fame.