Great story I will be waiting for new chapter.............................................................................................
I don't really know what the story lead into but I'm here reading and didn't know what to say about the story,plot, development, progress. cuz the story are just you know great but I can't till about the plot cuz it's alway changing the way it supposedly. Sometimes the mc know something but he just ignore it or pretend to be ignorant all the time he was at face of heroine. He's alway have a advantage from the start but he didn't grasp it.secondly the development of the story are can be said to be amazing but there's something will make you think that the story are changing but not changed at all and the mc development are doing great to see he becomes more sinister and cunning like a different villain tho he's still didn't cut the villain fate or villain aura you said, and it's still didn't change to more like villain halo or something can against who, and I like the way he progress to become smarter for the slightest when you added the second protagonist part but It's changing the important part where the heroine got ignore at the end I mean, the main heroine that you use at the cover of this. so far reading this in a day I wanna just tnx cux this story sometime make me laugh and make me confused somehow when the story sometime are mess to understand yeahh it's a great work thot I just woke about 1 star reviews This book are just great so you can give it a try!!ヘu2060（u2060。u2060□u2060°u2060）u2060ヘ⊙u2060﹏u2060⊙╏u2060u2060”u2060u2060⊚u2060͟u2060ʖu2060u2060⊚u2060u2060”u2060u2060╏(u2060╬u2060☉u2060дu2060⊙u2060)u2060⊰u2060⊹ฺ(u2060*u2060﹏u2060*u2060;u2060)(u2060⊙u2060_u2060◎u2060)ミu2060●u2060﹏u2060☉u2060ミ(u2060;u2060ŏu2060﹏u2060ŏu2060)(u2060•u2060u2060▽u2060u2060•u2060;u2060)(u2060＠u2060_u2060＠u2060;u2060)(u2060ꏿu2060﹏u2060ꏿu2060;u2060)(u2060・u2060_u2060・u2060;u2060)(u2060;u2060;u2060;u2060・u2060_u2060・u2060)(u2060˘u2060･u2060_u2060･u2060˘u2060)(u2060*u2060・u2060～u2060・u2060*u2060)(u2060・u2060_u2060・u2060;u2060)(u2060٥u2060↼u2060_u2060↼u2060)(u2060・u2060–u2060・u2060;u2060)u2060ゞ(u2060^u2060～u2060^u2060;u2060)u2060ゞ(u2060￣u2060ヘu2060￣u2060;u2060)(u2060٥u2060↼u2060_u2060↼u2060)(u2060ーu2060_u2060ーu2060゛u2060)(u2060─u2060.u2060─u2060|u2060|u2060）(u2060-u2060_u2060-u2060;u2060)(u2060-u2060_u2060-u2060メu2060)(u2060-u2060_u2060-u2060;u2060)u2060・u2060・u2060・(u2060´u2060-u2060﹏u2060-u2060`u2060；u2060)(u2060-u2060_u2060-u2060;u2060)(u2060~u2060_u2060~u2060;u2060)(u2060-u2060_u2060-u2060;u2060)u2060・u2060・u2060・(u2060´u2060-u2060﹏u2060-u2060`u2060；u2060)(u2060~u2060_u2060~u2060メu2060)ಠu2060ಗu2060ಠಠu2060_u2060ʖu2060ಠಠu2060ωu2060ಠಠu2060u2060೧u2060u2060ಠಠu2060◡u2060ಠಠu2060,u2060_u2060｣u2060ಠಠu2060ωu2060ಠಠu2060͜u2060ʖu2060u2060ಠಠu2060益u2060ಠಠu2060∀u2060ಠಠu2060﹏u2060ಠಠu2060‿u2060ಠ(u2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060)u2060>u2060⌐u2060■u2060-u2060■ಠu2060ᴥu2060ಠʕu2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060ʔΣu2060(u2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060)(u2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060)u2060>u2060⌐u2060■u2060-u2060■(u2060⌐u2060■u2060-u2060■u2060)¯u2060u2060_u2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060_u2060/u2060¯ಠu2060u2060ل͟u2060u2060ಠರu2060╭u2060╮u2060ರ(u2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060)u2060━u2060☆ﾟu2060.u2060*u2060･u2060｡ﾟ¯u2060u2060_u2060ಠu2060_u2060ಠu2060_u2060/u2060¯ರu2060_u2060ರರu2060╭u2060╮u2060ರ(u2060눈u2060‸u2060눈u2060)(u2060بu2060_u2060بu2060)ತu2060_u2060ತತu2060_u2060ʖu2060ತಠಿu2060_u2060ಠಿಠಿu2060_u2060ಠಠಿu2060ヮu2060ಠ
Lin Fan need I say more??Book is hilarious the Lin's aRe funny as F.World background doggy but it's still at its infancy.Characters background awesome and hilarious some have young master tendencies but what can you expect from eastern fantasy.Overall best currently must read.
retty good so far. The main character could definitely be considered evil, but the idea is pretty unique and I would definitely wish to see this novel continued. Maybe he will reform the Dragon Race into a more communal race rather than just a group of individuals. Can’t wait for more. THX
Turn off your brain for some stereotypical nationalistic racist work. All the other countries are doing bad except blank country. Replaced china with the US, but it makes no difference. Also you’ll notice that another story about the encryption one is also in the US randomly. And both characters are named Raymond. So with this we can assume it’s just translating choices so we dont go “oh another stereotypical china is best” . Also repeated chapters 3x so far
the plot hole in this novel is deep as abyss, it;s so deep that even abyss won't bother to look back at you.this is how the story goes1. MC: I need STRENGTH!2. got a little bit strength3. act cocky, because he got cheat to fight higher lvl4. beaten up badly5. breakthrough in the middle of battle, and win6. someone he kill have strong backer etc.7. defeat his enemies8. regret how much he lost9. back to number 1
.......MC with brains: CHECKRuthless MC: CHECKTime-worth plot: CHECKSystem: CHECKGood English: CHECKCalculating....................Calculation completeTHIS IS GOOD SH*T!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nope_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, same old same old bs, it triggers vomiting reflex and thoughts of ending it all! what a cruel world jk
Another case of a novel floating on the reviews it got in its infancy. Look at the reviews that rate this novel highly, the flat majority of them are in the first 400 chapters. After that, the novel is just mediocre and bad in some aspects. There is even a review telling you to skip about 200 chapters of the war arch. The other 400 after that is just barely tolerable.Stability of Updates: 5/5. The author drops down a lot of chapters on a consistent basis.Writing Quality: 5/5Story Development: I can't go lower than 1. He writes a lot but a lot of it is just info dumps. The quality suffers heavily when you get to the premium chapters. Each chapter is expensive and 2/3rd of most of his chapters involve info dump of some kind. As a result the story slogs. His grammar is excellent but a beautiful gun is useless if two out of every three bullets gets jammed.However, that's the smallest issue with this novel. This novel is a system novel. But, the author takes the main character to a war zone and leaves the system behind. How can you have a system novel when the system plays no part. He drops the system at around the 250 chapter mark and it doesn't make a significant play until the late 900s. Imagine paying that much for each chapter to get info dumps, slow story development, and no system for 3/4ths of the story. It's a rip off.Word Background: 5/5. The only good thing out of the info dumps is it tells you about the world. It's a tell don't show approach so it's annoying to read but whatever, the world is fleshed out.Character Design: Another 0/5. The main character has no agency in the story. He flies whichever way the wind blows him. You're not living his story. You're watching a guy on a roller coaster of ****. At the end he comes out with very little character growth. The author seems to think war medals gives his MC more character but it's just a medal on the same dude you had at the end of the first 300 chapters. The system is his growth and without it he's not a mech designer. He's just some soldier that happens to know how to fix and make mechs. The story is about designing mechs but the MC stops growing in that aspect just to become a soldier.Lazy Tension: The author does this thing where he describes everything in a grandiose manner. When the MC designs a mech, it sounds and comes across like the most badass thing of its category. However, the author always seems to introduce opponents with mechs that just seem to inch out or flat our destroy our MC. Why describe it in such a grand manner and then make it come out as a dud in competitions? It's such a lazy way to introduce *******. Of course, the MC wins but it comes across as Deus Ex Machinas and plot armor.The amount of money you spend for the value you receive is not worth it.
Is it just me or is leonel a 12 year old? it's painful to read due to how immature he is. But still good novel tho. I just hope leo died somehow. Kekw.
Megan has a lot cut out for her to deal with