Best book I've read on webnovel. 5.0! Writing style is consistent and the plot is full of twists and turns. Can't wait to see how the MC gets out of the tricky situation.
Be aware this is one of those shameless reviews out there. Because the first person who should love the story should be the author, who then shares his/her loved work to the other, bringing them the enjoyment to read.
Repeated grammatical mistakes, wrong words used.Author needs a proofreader. Preferably a human proofreader and not a machine/bot.Story is great, character is great, world is great. Just writing quality needs improvement.
from what I've read it's okay but for me the chapter are not enough for me to give a full judgments ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
don't waste your time
I'd say go for it ... before deciding if it's worth your time ?.yes mc works for crown prince (who is a woman) but kingdom also supports mc.world background is not much explained ~ is it a martial arts world ~ is it a cultivation world (this seems more likely)~ what type of characters live in it. Humans and demons perhaps..writing quality & translation quality are quite good ??
Just a machine translation you will get mad after reading it. It will be good if it gets a better translation. Same cultivation levels are called in different names in different chapters, even the names of the same characters are different.
So, I did try to give this story a try and it shows some promise. My main issue is how passive the MC is, this on top of the fact it has no tags makes me worry.To many good books have been ruined by massive MCs, I get wanting to build up the MC and show them grow into their role. However, with the personality of most of the females around him it makes me hesitant to continue reading.It is an interesting idea behind it and once it has tags or some sort of guarantee that The MC will change. I would be willing to come back and give it a second shot.
This is a great history!!!!!!! Mi idioma es el español, pero aún así te sigo y me agrada poder leer la creación de un hombre de cultura!! Sigue con tus buenas ideas, y por favor no la dejes caer!!!!!!
sigh......................................... it like reading mtl.. it hurt my head... i can feel it few of my brain cell was gone...?????
Honestly, my biggest problem is the lack of basic spelling, and intentionally spelling **** wrong, admiral amurica, really? Just use the real ****, who cares, it's nothing but annoying and adds nothing. Literally tanks this book to the point from I want to read this until it finishes to I might drop it. Or spelling different as difernt. Use basic ms word or grammerly m8, or just go through paragraph comments, every one is outlined in them months ago, you can't take 1 day off writing new chapters to fix the rest? You could even do like a discord thing for future chapters with unedited chaps, where they can read there and tell you any errors, I've seen other books do it and improve significantly
The story is kinsda slow until 150sh chapter but the development is well done so fae. I have read until 250 chapters of raw its funny how he is still training until now, he hasnt even gone to college yet. He isnt even OP he got the stats power thingy but he needs to train too, to be the very best :p just like how ash trains for over 20 years and never loses his youthful look. I have rated the world background 3 star as i havent seen much yet of the world building he is still in his highschool years training and expanding his knowledge.